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þSÿÇHØ:
when somebody says "did u write it"
i feel so proud, cuz that only means that they're thinkin, its so good it can't be his own...when i know its mine...
ne ways thanks angel


your welcome!
Posted on 5/18/2004 5:56:36 PM
SALL:
haaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..
im dullllll
duullllllll
beryy berryyyy duuulllllllllllllll

kya takleef hai ???

Tabeyat tu thaik hai?
aaj sach he boltay ja rahay hain?
Posted on 5/18/2004 10:02:04 PM

tabiyat bohot kharab hai
2 k 4 nazar aa rahe hein
236 bukhar hai
Posted on 5/18/2004 11:16:13 PM
sall kaho to chaar kandhoon ka intezam kardoon
Posted on 5/19/2004 1:04:55 AM
SALL:

tabiyat bohot kharab hai
2 k 4 nazar aa rahe hein
236 bukhar hai

Hairyet ..aap ko tu ab tak foot ho jana chahye tha..aap yahan..kya masla hai?
Posted on 5/19/2004 9:18:24 PM
þSÿÇHØ:
sall kaho to chaar kandhoon ka intezam kardoon


Nahi Inhi gari par lay jayien gay
Posted on 5/19/2004 9:19:13 PM



kyaaaa na..
itni jaldi pari hai mere kul k chawal khane ki



dont worry,, na kandhe, na gari
hum khud chale jate hein

jiss dhaj se koi maktal mei gaya,
woh shaan salamat rehti hai
iss jaan ka yaro kya kehna
iss jaan ki to koi baat nahi
adaab arz hai
Posted on 5/19/2004 10:53:04 PM
wat is Dhaj n Maktal
Posted on 5/20/2004 4:48:17 AM
uuffffffffffff..

DHAJ --> saj dhaj... shaan o shokat,,
in simple words --> STYLE

MAKTAL comes of KATAL..
matlab k jiss jaga pe katal kiya jae..


now read it again



Posted on 5/20/2004 11:17:00 AM
Posted on 5/20/2004 2:28:34 PM
now its a good one, firt two lines matches me perfect
Posted on 5/21/2004 12:40:09 AM
wafa ko kya hua




these 4 lines matches me perfectly
aur waise bhi mera sher hai

zyada shyan pati ki na to tum pe chor du gi
Posted on 5/21/2004 11:24:19 AM
nahin nahin mein masoom sa ek bachcha hoon jo 3 post tak spammin karne wala hai
Posted on 5/21/2004 11:30:54 AM
3
Posted on 5/21/2004 11:30:59 AM
2
Posted on 5/21/2004 11:31:03 AM
1
Posted on 5/21/2004 11:31:07 AM
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Posted on 5/21/2004 11:31:54 AM

vv vvvvvvvv nice..
ehemm --> it s not urs





yeh pehle kya tha ??
Posted on 5/21/2004 11:47:38 AM
its mine ofcourse sall, all the poems i've posted so long are all mine...written by me n only me...i'm the best

pehle kya pehle
Posted on 5/21/2004 12:13:04 PM
HOWWWWW ROMANTIC......(EXCEPT THE LAST LINE )
Posted on 5/21/2004 2:19:49 PM
chalo jisse jo pasand aajaye
Posted on 5/21/2004 2:26:50 PM
sall ko complain karnaki aadhat pad gayi hai. Nice work bro
Posted on 5/21/2004 4:43:15 PM
me to mazak karti hu bass



ab nahi kahu gi kuch bhi..
Posted on 5/21/2004 6:10:20 PM
sorry :P i was just pickin on you too. what good is this place if we cant do that :)
Posted on 5/21/2004 8:52:20 PM
thanks broken
i don't have the old ones saved, but i'll keep writtin the new ones
koi baat nahin sall, lagi raho
Posted on 5/22/2004 12:40:57 AM
me phir se majak kar rahi thi na
Posted on 5/23/2004 1:36:42 PM
majak nahin hota mazak hota hai
Posted on 5/24/2004 1:18:04 AM
Beautiful Life

A delightful flower blossoming with its fears
With thoughts of perishing his love, which bring him tears
Although a bright future calls upon him, he refuses to interfere
Love flourishes away, wounds recover, why let the life exterminate?
The bond is not eternal, if one should make it appear
Love has varieties, kin’s love never disappear
A lovely life, which lies in the darkness
Let the light enter and show the true smile of happiness
Thou shall not question, “Que es amour?”
Love is invisible and immortal, the answer will be
Once your inner atman is found, you’ll see

LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL
Posted on 5/25/2004 3:00:53 AM
nice one...
fits the true lovers
Posted on 5/25/2004 3:08:38 AM
nice pappu!
Posted on 5/25/2004 12:16:52 PM
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