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~*~ ÐükH HEE ÐükH ~*~

Tum se bichar k main kiya hoon

ik adhori nazaam ka misrah

yah koi beemar parinda

kapi mein aik zinda tittli

yah ik murda pila patha

ankhen hoon main khwaab zada si

yah ankhoon mein koi tota sapna

palkoon ki deewar k pichay

pagal qaidi yah ik aanso

dhoop mein liptah lanba sehra

yah pir khofzada sa bacha

tooti hoi chori ka tukra

yah koi bhola bisra vadah

tum hi batao

tum sey bichar k main kiya hoon

aik purani qabar ka qutba

yah koi mathrook dua
Posted on 4/27/2004 4:08:23 AM
Thanks subha

ok here is n other sad one...


TUMNE JO AKELA CHORD DIYA
AISA LAGA SAB KUCH LOOT GAYA
TUMNE NAZREIN JO PHER LEIN
HUMARE LIYE DUNYA MIT GAYEE
TUMNE JO HUMEIN YOON BHULAYA
HUMARE LIYE JAISE...
MAUT KA PEGHAM HAI AAYA...

ok i just made this up right now, so maybe won't be that cool, but m workin on the next poem
Posted on 4/27/2004 8:24:53 AM
com com jii
nice
Posted on 4/27/2004 5:54:39 PM
nice collection
Posted on 4/27/2004 9:19:44 PM
subha:
com com jii
nice



me and my dirty mind
Posted on 4/27/2004 10:59:38 PM
Posted on 4/27/2004 11:16:34 PM
Brokensoul:
subha:
com com jii
nice



me and my dirty mind



Posted on 4/28/2004 12:53:13 AM
,,,
Posted on 4/28/2004 4:05:00 AM
to tab tayali he death ti yach?
Posted on 4/28/2004 4:07:02 AM
mude tuch tamuj tain taya
Posted on 4/28/2004 4:19:49 AM
aap to b nai aya?
talo mitti pao
Posted on 4/28/2004 4:23:58 AM
Posted on 4/28/2004 4:28:00 AM
ait to
log titna hachtey hen uphoooooooo
Posted on 4/28/2004 5:31:04 AM
khush rehna is good for health
Posted on 4/28/2004 5:37:29 AM
but good things r not for devil na yach
Posted on 4/28/2004 5:39:04 AM
ofcourse they are
Posted on 4/28/2004 11:14:45 AM
no no no they arnt
Posted on 4/28/2004 12:21:43 PM
this one s nice
Posted on 4/28/2004 6:00:03 PM
thanks
ather dekhlo tumhare matlab ki love poem hai
Posted on 4/29/2004 2:03:04 AM
han na..
jali hui








khehehekeheekheekeekhekeheee...



oupss.. ninuuuuuu timmmmmmmmmee
Posted on 4/30/2004 10:59:44 PM
go to sleep sall, die brainless die
Posted on 4/30/2004 11:33:01 PM
haaaaaaae lutt ja'ain ge
hum to mit jaaaaaaa'ain ge
aisi baaaaaatein kiya na karrroooooooo

Posted on 4/30/2004 11:53:16 PM
sahi hai tumhari marzi jo karna hai karo
Posted on 5/1/2004 12:30:16 AM
na rawaaa kahiye
na sazaa kahiye
kahiye kahiye,, mujhe bura kahiye..

dil mein rakhne ki baat hai gham e ishq
iss ko harr giz na barmala kahiye
kahiye kahiye,, mujhe bura kahiye..

aa gai aap ko maseehai
marne walon ko marhaba kahiye
kahiye kahiye,, mujhe bura kahiye..


Posted on 5/1/2004 12:50:27 AM
sall itne mushkil poetry kyon likhti ho
Posted on 5/1/2004 1:10:47 AM
areyyy,, iss mei first 2 line k ilawa kya mushkil hai
khopri ko hilaya karo thora
Posted on 5/1/2004 1:15:59 AM
...
Posted on 5/1/2004 2:21:43 AM
kaafi words mushkil thay sall bachchon ka khayal kya karo
Posted on 5/1/2004 2:24:27 AM
hey i like that song

Posted on 5/1/2004 2:35:19 AM
this is not a song, this my own written poetry...
Posted on 5/1/2004 4:31:53 AM
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