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aae tum yaad mujhe
gaane lagi harr dharkan
khushboo laai pawan
mehkaa chandan !!

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nice salll ////i dunt know kitnay salll
Posted on 3/19/2004 4:53:25 PM
pata bhi nahin chaley ga keh kitnay sallllllllll??????
Posted on 3/19/2004 8:21:04 PM
haan last one sahi hai sall
Posted on 3/19/2004 8:29:56 PM
,,,
Posted on 3/19/2004 8:32:50 PM
thnx adii.. aap ko kya karna hai maloom kar k.. yep tarash is rite..




First attraction of love is the looks?
But that describes lust in the books
You think falling in love is smart?
When you know in the end she’s gona break your heart
heyy... nice
Posted on 3/20/2004 2:12:04 AM
aakhir likhee kisne hain...meine ofcourse for me
Posted on 3/20/2004 3:44:29 AM
woow kewl poetry
Posted on 3/20/2004 3:51:32 AM
yupseez...
Posted on 3/20/2004 3:56:12 AM
na na nannaa alala lallaaa.. bla bla baalllllaaa




now my turn..
for nasi bacha :
dil jalta hai to jalne de
aansuuu na baha fariyaad na kar
tu parda nasheen ka aashiq hai
yun naam e wafa barbaad na kar
. . .
Posted on 3/20/2004 2:18:58 PM
Posted on 3/20/2004 4:43:01 PM
wow sall ye tumne to nahin likhee, haan
Posted on 3/20/2004 11:01:48 PM
YAS:
,,,



many many 4 u
Posted on 3/21/2004 8:05:44 AM
thank u thank u aadab....
God Bless me, right?
Posted on 3/21/2004 12:42:55 PM
han to han to aur kya..
me ne hi to likhi hai

saaabbb me ne hi likha hai..

inn kali sadiyon k sir pe
jab raat ka aanchal dhalke ga
jab dukh k baadal pighlein ge
jab sukh ka saghar chalke ga
jab ambar jhoom k naache ga
jab dharti naghme gae gi
wo subah kabhi to aae gi

maana k abhi tere mere
armanon ki keemat kuch bhi nahi
mitti ka bhi hai kuch mol magar
insaano ki keemat kuch bhi nahi
insano ki izzat jab jhoote
sikkon mei na toli jae gi
wo subah kabhi to aae gi

how is it
Posted on 3/21/2004 4:07:28 PM
nice salll..........
Posted on 3/21/2004 9:57:04 PM
good one sall...ek din tum meri tarah likh sako gi, just keep it up beta
Posted on 3/22/2004 2:40:01 AM
thnxx adiiiii..


jiii bare abba.. nawazish, adaab
Posted on 3/22/2004 1:35:26 PM
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Posted on 3/22/2004 10:34:39 PM
YES I WANA BE YOUR EVERY TEAR
SO I CAN LIVE IN YOUR EYES




tooooooooooooooooooooo gooooood

Posted on 3/23/2004 2:12:00 AM
see imma very thoughtful poet...
Posted on 3/23/2004 3:07:36 AM
subha:
YES I WANA BE YOUR EVERY TEAR
SO I CAN LIVE IN YOUR EYES




tooooooooooooooooooooo gooooood



khyal rakhna TEARS bhi EYES se bahir aa jate hein
Posted on 3/23/2004 7:24:37 AM
lol khayal rakha na...

YES I WANA BE YOUR EVERY TEAR
SO I CAN LIVE IN YOUR EYES
ROLL ON YOUR CHEEKS
AND I’LL DIE ON YOUR LIPS
Posted on 3/23/2004 10:57:30 AM
hmmmmmmmmm..



VV NICE
Posted on 3/23/2004 5:55:35 PM
yupz
Posted on 3/24/2004 12:42:09 AM
¥Ä§ ÐËViL:
lol khayal rakha na...

YES I WANA BE YOUR EVERY TEAR
SO I CAN LIVE IN YOUR EYES
ROLL ON YOUR CHEEKS
AND I’LL DIE ON YOUR LIPS




Posted on 3/24/2004 2:06:48 AM
Posted on 3/24/2004 4:08:38 AM
ajaa sohniye ni aaja
ajaaa sohniye niiiii ajaaa
sajnaaaa de kollll
......
Posted on 3/25/2004 2:07:58 AM
ye kya ho raha hai
Posted on 3/25/2004 12:54:38 PM
kisss kaam ka ye jaam hai
iss mei maza wo nahi hai
bhar k bhi yeh khali sa hai
iss mei nasha wo nahi hai

sathiyaaa reyyyyy
saajnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
areyy areyy areyyy..
pyaar thora iss mei mila de sharabi
dekh phir hota hai kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Posted on 3/25/2004 1:59:57 PM
akarh bakarh pambe po,,, ah heart mere yoh to na rooo    


yach n salllllllll
Posted on 3/25/2004 11:08:12 PM
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