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paki_fan

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Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein
Aankhon ki khidki per ek sayaa sa lehraata hai
Dil ke derwaze per koi dastak de ke jata hai
Gherri gherri kaali aankhen, mujse mujko puchhatti hai
Hathoan ki rekhaon mein ek chehra sa ban jatta hai
Uski sanse resham jaisi gallo ko chu jaati hai
Uske hathoan ki khushboo hai ab tak mere ballo mein
Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein....
Posted 01 Dec 2004

wafakadard says
mein bataoo gha use zakm ki lizzat kiya hai
phooloo se mera taruf tou karrayea jaye


PAKI where are you? yar ap ko aur ap ki poetry ko kafi miss kar rahay hain
Posted 11 Feb 2005

cutefriend says
Posted 11 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
very nice guys....
Posted 12 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
Posted 12 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
jab pyaar kiya tha to yeh na socha tha ...
ki zindagi mein yeh din bhi ayenge..
hum apna haal-e-dil yun sabko sunayege..
Posted 12 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
zindagi tere saath kutati to ..sukar-e-khuda hota
mujhme bhi jeene ka hausla hota
lekin taqdeer mein kuch aur hi likha tha
tujhse juda ho ke tarapna likha tha
Posted 12 Feb 2005

paki_fan says

very niceee


wafakadard said:

mein bataoo gha use zakm ki lizzat kiya hai
phooloo se mera taruf tou karrayea jaye


PAKI where are you? yar ap ko aur ap ki poetry ko kafi miss kar rahay hain



hmm esi duniya mein hi hoon abhi tak sunny
Posted 13 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
Dil Ki Batain , Bata Deti Hain , Aankhen ,
Dharkanon Ko Jaga Deti Hain, Aankhen ,
Dil Pe Chalta Nahi Jadoo, Cheroon Ka Kabhi ,
Dil Ko Tu , Deewana Bana Deti Hain ,Aankhen,
Woh Hum Se Baat Nahi Karte , Tu Na Kare ,
Haal Sara Unke Dil Ka , Suna Deti Hain Aankhen,
Gham Sada Rehta Nahi , Aadmi Ke Saath,
Ashk Bana Kar , Chalka Deti Hain Aankhen,
Aata Hai Jab Dor - E - Jawani , Tu Ae Dosto,
Sunder Sapne Zehan Mein ,Basa Deti Hain Aankhen,
Ma Na Ke Neend Aati Hai , Aankhon Hi Ke Raste ,
Magar Kabhi Kabar ,Neend ,Ura Deti Hain Aankhen,
Eesha Shukar Hai , Khuda Ne Ata Ki , Aankhon Ki Neamat Humain,
Dard -O-Gham ,Sare Dil Ke , Chupa Deti Hain Aankhen.
Posted 13 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
Meri Ankhoon Kay Samandar main Jalan Kaysi Hai
Ajj Phir Dil Ko Tarapnay Ki LaGan Kaysi Hai

Ab Kisi Chaat Pay Chiragon Ki Qatarin Bhi Nahi
Ab Teray Shehar Ki Galioyon Main Guthan Kaysi Hai

Baraf Kay Roop Main dhaal Jain Gay Saray Rishtay
Mujh say Pocho Kay Muhabbat Main Agan Kaysi Hai

Main Teray Wisal Ki Khuwahish Ko na Marnay Doon Ga
Mausam-e-Hijar Kay lehjay Main Thakan Kaysi Hai

Raigzaron Main Jo Banti Rahi Kantoon Ki RiDa
Uss Ki Majboor Sii Ankhoon Main Kiran Kaysi Hai

Mujhe Masoom si Pagal Larki Pay Taras Aata hai
Ussay Dekho Too Muhabbat Main Magan Kaysi Hai
Posted 13 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
QADAM QADAM PE MILAY IK NAEY KHUSHII TUM KO,
ANDHARII RAH MAIN MIL GAEY ROSHNII TUM KO,
MARII DUA HAI AY KAASH LAG GAEY,
MERAY HAYAT K LAMHOON KI ZINDAGII TUM KO.
Posted 13 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
paki_fan said:


very niceee


wafakadard said:

mein bataoo gha use zakm ki lizzat kiya hai
phooloo se mera taruf tou karrayea jaye


PAKI where are you? yar ap ko aur ap ki poetry ko kafi miss kar rahay hain


acha abhi ider he hain
main samjaa ARBAB nay ap ka kam kar diya

hmm esi duniya mein hi hoon abhi tak sunny

Main samjaa ke Arbab nay ap ka kam kar diya hai
Posted 13 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
khafa ho ker bhi hum hi ko chahta hai wo shaks
choti si baaton per akser rooth jata hai wo shaks

aansuo ki kimat pahchaanta hai wo apni
phir kyhun akser aansu bahata hai wo shaks
Posted 13 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
wafakadard said:

paki_fan said:


very niceee


wafakadard said:

mein bataoo gha use zakm ki lizzat kiya hai
phooloo se mera taruf tou karrayea jaye


PAKI where are you? yar ap ko aur ap ki poetry ko kafi miss kar rahay hain


acha abhi ider he hain
main samjaa ARBAB nay ap ka kam kar diya

hmm esi duniya mein hi hoon abhi tak sunny

Main samjaa ke Arbab nay ap ka kam kar diya hai

Posted 13 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
Apnay HI LahooH Say KaHii HOroof LIkh Behtahy
Ye Na SocHa Kay IN Say ZinDaGii Kamm HOgi
Woh ZindaGi Bhi Kia ZinDaGi HOgi
Jis MaiN Teri Her Sooo Kammi Hogi
Posted 13 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
paki_fan said:

wafakadard said:

paki_fan said:


very niceee


wafakadard said:

mein bataoo gha use zakm ki lizzat kiya hai
phooloo se mera taruf tou karrayea jaye


PAKI where are you? yar ap ko aur ap ki poetry ko kafi miss kar rahay hain


acha abhi ider he hain
main samjaa ARBAB nay ap ka kam kar diya

hmm esi duniya mein hi hoon abhi tak sunny

Main samjaa ke Arbab nay ap ka kam kar diya hai

Posted 13 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
AAPNE HATHOON KI LAKIRON MEIN SAJA LE MUJH KO

MEIN HOON TERA TU APNA BNA LE MUJH KO

MEIN HOON KNTA TU BACH MUJH SE

MEIN HOON GAR PHOOL TU JOORE MEIN SAJA LE MUJH KO

TARKE ULFAT KI KSAM BHI KOI HOTI HAI KSAM

TU KABHI YAAD TU KR BHOOLNE WALEY MUJH KO

KHUD KO MEIN BAANT NA DALOON DAMAN DAMAN

KR DIYA TUNEY GAR MERE HA WALE MUJH KO

BADHA PHIR BADHA HAI MEIN ZEHR BHI PEE JAOON GA

SHRT YEH HAI KOI BANHOON MEIN SANBHALE MUJH KO
Posted 13 Feb 2005

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 14 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
thanks
Posted 14 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
Eik woh hain jo tamano kay dusmaan hi bane rahe
eik hum hain jinhe ehsaas e tamana bhi na huwa
Posted 14 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
nicee
Posted 14 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
Mohabbat ki shamma jalake to dekho,
Zara dil ki duniya saja kar to dekho,
Tumhe ho na jaaye mohabbat to kehna,
Zara humse nazaren milake to dekho.
Posted 14 Feb 2005

geetanjali says

VERY NICE CREATIONS
ALL OF U HAV GREAT POETRY, GREAT FRIENDSHIP,GREAT EXPRESSIONS...........FATHOMLESS DEEPNESS.KEEP IT UP DEARS WITH SAME SPIRITS.
Posted 14 Feb 2005

Fairl_Girl says
gr8 work both paki and wafa
Posted 14 Feb 2005

Fairl_Girl says

Tere Naam Ghazal Likh Raha Ho
Ek Hijar Ka Wasal Likh Raha Ho



Tere Chehre Ki Khoobsoorti Ko
Ek Chaand Likh Raha Hoo .....



Teri Bheggi HuYee Zulfoo Per
Ek Deewaan Likh Raha Hoo ...



Tere Hoontoo Ki Piyas Ko
Ek Sharaab Likh Raha Hoo



Tere Hansney key Andaz Ko
Ek Shabbab Likh Raha Hoo.



Tere Aashkoo Ki Barsat Ko
Ek Darya Likh Raha Hoo ..



Terii Nazak Aadaoo Ko
Ek Gulab Likh Raha Hoo



Terii Dilkush Aawaz Ko
Ek KoiYal Likh Raha Hoo



Teri Aakhon Ki Kashish Ko
Ek Jaam Likh Raha Hoo ...



Tere Naam Ke Intisab Per AnMoL
Bus Ek Kitab Likh Raha Hoo ...
Posted 14 Feb 2005

paki_fan says



very nice janubaby
Posted 15 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
Tum jo chaho to,Meray pass apnay dil ke Har wo dharkan bhej saktay ho Mohabbat ka har wo lafz,,
Jo tumharay dil mai Meray leyai janam laita hai Lekin tum yai jantay ho kai,,
Yai sab kuch to tum mujhay dai he chukay ho,,,,,,,,
Aur mai nai tumhay jo diya hai Shiad soo Baras tak ,,!!!!
Tumhay kio bhe na dai payai..
Aur han Agar tum,,,
ai mehsoos karo kai....
Tumhay mujh sai barhkar,,,,
Kisi nai chaha hai too...??
TO TUM MUJHAY....
Bhulanay mai aik pal bhe...
Zaya na karna,,,
Kyon kai meray leyai wo he aik pal SOO BARAS KE SAZA SAI KAM NA HO GA,,!!!..
Posted 15 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
Usay Panay Ki Khwoish Bertey Chaly Gay
Woh Inkar Pay Inkar Kartey Chaly Gay
Mohabat Ka Yeh Tareeqa Anokha Hi Sahi
Mein Us Say Pyar Woh Mujh Say Nafrat Karty Chaly Gay
Tooti Hoi Door Say Udata Raha Patang Phir Bhi Mohabat Ki
Woh Patang Udti Chaly Gay
Phool Ban Kay Woh Meri Zindagi Mein Aye
Khushboo Ban Kay Woh Meri Zindagi Say Chaly Gay
Dil Mein Basa Kay Rakh Loon Mein Tujahy
Oh Meray Yara Par Nafrat Teri Dil Barty Chaly Gay
Dil Tujhay Yaad Kar Kay Roota Hai Is Tarah
Teri Dooli Meray Aankhoon Kay Samanay Chali Gay .
Posted 16 Feb 2005

Vah vah vah kiya baat hai...

yaar hope dat realy didnt happen...

heres one fro me...
dil chiiz kyaa hai aap merii jaan liijiye
bas ek baar meraa kahaa maan liijiye
is anjuman me.n aapako aanaa hai baar baar
diivaar-o-dar ko Gaur se pahachaan liijiye
maanaa ke dosto.n ko nahii.n dostii kaa paas
lekin ye kyaa ke Gair kaa ehasaan liijiye
kahiye to aasamaa.N ko zamii.n par utaar laaye.N
mushkil nahii.n hai kuchh bhii agar Thaan liijiye
Posted 16 Feb 2005

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 16 Feb 2005

Fairl_Girl says
paki_fan said:




very nice janubaby

Posted 16 Feb 2005

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