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paki_fan

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Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein
Aankhon ki khidki per ek sayaa sa lehraata hai
Dil ke derwaze per koi dastak de ke jata hai
Gherri gherri kaali aankhen, mujse mujko puchhatti hai
Hathoan ki rekhaon mein ek chehra sa ban jatta hai
Uski sanse resham jaisi gallo ko chu jaati hai
Uske hathoan ki khushboo hai ab tak mere ballo mein
Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein....
Posted 01 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 30 Jan 2005

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 30 Jan 2005

wafakadard says
Bhaot Khob JB
Posted 30 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
hahahahaha
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
nice janubaby
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
where is paki
Posted 31 Jan 2005

wafakadard says
Arbab Kahir to hai abhot hahaha hoo rahi hai
Yar Paki kud he gum hai aj kal
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
haan yaar aur kiya karon
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
nain nahin janabs..
mein yaheen hoon..
kiun kia hua?
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
thank u wafakadard n Arbab

and very nice shairs of urs and sunny's
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
thanks laiken tumharey shairs kahan hain
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
coming up
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
jaldi karo sher bolo tumhari bari hay ji
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
for all my friends here

Friends will come and friends will go,
The seasons change and it will show,
I will age and so will you,
But our friendship stays, strong and true
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
ZINDAGI KUCH ESE LAGI MUJE
JESE HO KOI KHALI MAKAN
ZINDAGI SE MILA WO KUCH MUJE
JESE PAI HO KISI GHUNA KI SAZA
ZINDAGI SE MILI HAI MUJE TANHAI
JESE HOWA HON MAIN TAN SE JUDA
ZINDAGI BHI KIA KHUB RANG DEKHTAI HAI
APNO KO BHI KABHI KABHI BEGHANA KAR DETI HAI
ZINDAGI SE HON MAIUSS TU NAHI PER
SHIKWA KIA THA LEQEEN SILA MILA BHI NAHI
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
for those who are not my friends

mustakil is jahan main tum bhi nahi
mustakil is jahan main hum bhi nahi
na musarat he mustakil hai "yahan"
mustakil is jahan main gum bhi nahi
phir adawat bhi mustakil kiun ho
aoo kuch is tarhan na kar dekhin
in andheron main roshani karlain
aoo dosty karlain,aoo dosty karlain
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
thanks janab
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
u welcome
Posted 31 Jan 2005

paki_fan says
kahan sey laon hunar Ab usey mananey ka
koi jawaz hi nahin us key Rooth jaaney ka
mohobaton main saza bhi mujhi ko milni thi
key jurm main ney kiya raabtey barhaney ka
Posted 31 Jan 2005

ONLYARBAB says
nice paki
Posted 31 Jan 2005

wafakadard says
paki_fan said:

kahan sey laon hunar Ab usey mananey ka
koi jawaz hi nahin us key Rooth jaaney ka
mohobaton main saza bhi mujhi ko milni thi
key jurm main ney kiya raabtey barhaney ka


Kahan say laon hunar ab usay manay ke liye,
kohi jawaz he nhi us ke rooth janay ka....
mohabbat main saza bhi mujh ko he milni thi...
jurm kiya tha main nay us say rabtay barhanay ke liye...

SOrry Paki likun main nay aysay he paraa tha
Posted 31 Jan 2005

Fairl_Girl says
gooooooood paki
Posted 01 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
JB how about me
Posted 01 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
Zindagi bhar ke liye tera sath Nibhana chahty hain,
Tumhaari in ankho mai sada ke liye bas jana chahty hain,
Chahty is dil ki, na jaane humse kaya kaya chahati hain,
Najar bhar tumhe dekh kar, Tum per mar jana chahty hain!!!!
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Fairl_Girl says
U R AWESOME SUNNY KEEP IT UP
Posted 02 Feb 2005

Fairl_Girl says
tu na aata tri awaz to aati rehti
ghar bhi kismat se tere ghar kai barabar na howa

Posted 02 Feb 2005

cutefriend says
Posted 02 Feb 2005

wafakadard says
JANUBABY said:

tu na aata tri awaz to aati rehti
ghar bhi kismat se tere ghar kai barabar na howa


Thanks JB

Dil ki dhadkano me bas gaye ho tum,
saanso ki khushboo ban gaye ho tum,
maut ki to baat hi kya ,
ab to meri zindagi ban gaye ho tum... (MISBAH)
Posted 02 Feb 2005

paki_fan says
thanks Arbab

wafakadard said:

paki_fan said:

kahan sey laon hunar Ab usey mananey ka
koi jawaz hi nahin us key Rooth jaaney ka
mohobaton main saza bhi mujhi ko milni thi
key jurm main ney kiya raabtey barhaney ka


Kahan say laon hunar ab usay manay ke liye,
kohi jawaz he nhi us ke rooth janay ka....
mohabbat main saza bhi mujh ko he milni thi...
jurm kiya tha main nay us say rabtay barhanay ke liye...

SOrry Paki likun main nay aysay he paraa tha


hmm je its the same thing...
and thanks janab


thank u janubaby
Posted 02 Feb 2005

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