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Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein
Aankhon ki khidki per ek sayaa sa lehraata hai
Dil ke derwaze per koi dastak de ke jata hai
Gherri gherri kaali aankhen, mujse mujko puchhatti hai
Hathoan ki rekhaon mein ek chehra sa ban jatta hai
Uski sanse resham jaisi gallo ko chu jaati hai
Uske hathoan ki khushboo hai ab tak mere ballo mein
Aisa pehli baar hua hai satrah atharah salo mein
Un dekha anjanna koi aane laga hai khayalon mein....
Posted 01 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
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Posted 06 Dec 2004

paki_fan says
JANUBABY said:

paki_fan said:

oh in sindhi.. nice..
wasey janubaby aap ko sindhi ati hai?

mt mother tounge is sindhi


oh ok.. very nice


very nice poems
especially the last one.. and others aswell
well ofcourse i can't read the first one   
Posted 06 Dec 2004

paki_fan says

Un k aney se jo aa jaty hai chehrey par raunaq.....
Woh samjhety hain bemar ka hall acha hai....


Posted 06 Dec 2004

paki_fan says

eman kho dayta ha insan aksar borai main..........
dil jeet layta ha insan aksar achai main..........
joht main wo lazat kanhaan ha milti ..............
jo milti ha insan ko aksar sachai main............

Posted 06 Dec 2004

paki_fan says

Koi Achi Si Sazaa Do Mujhay………........
Chalo Aisa Karo Bhula Do Mujhay………....
Tum Sey Bichroon Tu Mout Aa Jaiy………...
Dil Ki Gehraiyon Sey Dua Do Mujhay……..

Posted 06 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says

i will translet in urdu 4 u
Posted 06 Dec 2004

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~Sweet~ says
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~Sweet~ says
Wow nice Janubaby
Posted 07 Dec 2004

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Posted 12 Dec 2004

paki_fan says
wow great poems.. u really have a greaaaat collection of poems thanks for sharing.. keep it up
Posted 12 Dec 2004

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~Sweet~ says
Nice
Posted 13 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
gud
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Fairl_Girl says
Posted 14 Dec 2004

           GUD WORK JANUBAY KEEP IT UP.
Posted 14 Dec 2004

           GUD WORK JANUBABE KEEP IT UP.
Posted 14 Dec 2004

paki_fan says
very nice fairl girl.......especially the one " arrsh pe khuda milta hai..aur dusri dono bhi bohattt achi hain,,
Posted 15 Dec 2004

paki_fan says
very nice one janubaby...
Posted 15 Dec 2004

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