shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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hawwa ki beti

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aslam o alaikum to janubaba family
aik topic start kar rahi hoon,
shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey apney shair ki ibteda karain
for example ;;
ghulami main na kaam aaein tadbeerain na taqdeerain
jo ho zoq e yaqeen paida to katt jati hain zanjeerain
is shair main sey aik lafz select kar rahi hoon
jati[ sey shair hai];;

dil sey daikhi nahin jati khamoshi ghar ki
kis tarha ujrha hua shehar gawara hota

so lets play

waiting 4reply.................hkb

Posted 20 Nov 2005

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ye bait-baazi to nahi hey...

Posted 26 Nov 2005

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new_beau said:
MEEM..

Manzil Ki Justaju mainn Kiyun Phir Raha hay Raahi
Itna azeem ho ja, keh Manzil Tujhay Pukaaray"

YEH

AZEEM

MERI mohabbat to ik gohar hey teri mohabbat bay-karaan Samandar
tu phir bhi mujh se azeem-tar hey kahan gohar hey kahan samandar

love this

Posted 26 Nov 2005

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Doctor Sam said:
ye bait-baazi to nahi hey...

Jee Sorry,..Mainn Bhool ker Topic miss ker gaya...

Its SHAIR CHAIN...

Posted 26 Nov 2005

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Doctor Sam said:
AZEEM

MERI mohabbat to ik gohar hey teri mohabbat bay-karaan Samandar
tu phir bhi mujh se azeem-tar hey kahan gohar hey kahan samandar

SAMANDAR...

"Halaat kay Qadmonn pay Qalander Nahin Girta"
"Tootay Bhi jo Taara tou Zameen Per Nahin Girta"

"Girtay sabhi aa kay Deriya Samander mainn"
"Lekin kisi Deriya mainn Samander nahin Girta"

Posted 26 Nov 2005

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SAMADAR

wafa ki basti main rehne walon ye hum ne Mohsin ye tor seekha
labon pe sehra ki tashnagi ho, magar dilon main nehaaN samandar

love this ghazal..

Posted 27 Nov 2005

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Word Repeat kiyun Kiya

SAMANDER / SEHRA / LUB /

"Khushk Hontonn pay meray, Apnay Lab-e-ter rakh day"
"Meray Saaqi, Meray Sehra pay Samander Rakh day"

Posted 28 Nov 2005

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SEHRA

hum bhi kya ajab k kardi dhoop k talay
sehra khareed laaye hain Barsaat bech kar

(agar ismain koi gardbard ho to correct kar dain plz)

Posted 28 Nov 2005

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DHOOP

"Chalay Aao, Saawan ki Zidd na kero"
"Bera Lutf day ga Safer Dhoop Mainn"

Posted 28 Nov 2005

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lutf

LUTF wo ishq main paaye hain k jee janta hey
runj bhi aisay uthaye hain k jee janta hey

Posted 28 Nov 2005

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Doctor Sam said:
lutf

LUTF wo ishq main paaye hain k jee janta hey
runj bhi aisay uthaye hain k jee janta hey

inhi kadmon ne tumhare inhi kadmon ki kasam
khaak mei aise milae hein k jee janta hai

JEE
jeete JEE kucha e dildaar se jaya na gaya
us ki deevaar ka sir se mere saya na gaya

Posted 30 Nov 2005

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deewar

hey kon utarta hey wahan jis k liye chand
kehne ko to chehray pas-e-deewar bohat hain...

Posted 30 Nov 2005

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CHEHRAY

"Chehrey pe meray zulf ko bikhrao kisi din
"Kiya roz garajte ho? baras jaao kisi din "

Posted 30 Nov 2005

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aisi chaai thi kahan gham ki ghata'ain pehle
haan mere deeda e tarr khuub BARAS ab ke BARAS

Posted 01 Dec 2005

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GHUM

dil k dhundon se bhi fursat ho chuki
a ghum-e-duniya bata ab kya kerain...

Posted 01 Dec 2005

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I think jo word choose kiya jaye..shair uss say SHURU hona chaiyey...Yeh tum log ker kiya rahay ho

Aur yeh HKB hum ko KAAM per laga ker kahan chali gayee hay

FURSAT

Fursat milay tou Poochh kabhi unn ka haal bhi
Jo Log jee rahay hainn teray Piyaar kay Baghair"

Posted 01 Dec 2005

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janaab topic ka naam zara ghor se perhain...

kisi bhi lafz se na...

wese ye aap ne achi baat kahi...

Posted 01 Dec 2005

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Meharbaani

Posted 01 Dec 2005

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FURSAT

Fursat milay tou Poochh kabhi unn ka haal bhi
Jo Log jee rahay hainn teray Piyaar kay Baghair"

Baghair
guzar to jaye gi tere baghair bhi lekin
bohat udaas bohat bay-qaraar guzray gi..

Posted 01 Dec 2005

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baghair

guzar to jaye gi tere baghair bhi lekin
jo teray saath na guzri woh zindagi kia hai

Posted 02 Dec 2005

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ye repetition kis khushi main timepass jee/?

Posted 02 Dec 2005

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Doctor Sam said:
Baghair

guzar to jaye gi tere baghair bhi lekin
bohat udaas bohat bay-qaraar guzray gi..

TERE

Tere baaray mainn Jub Socha nahin tha
Mainn Tanha tha, Magar itna nahin tha

Posted 02 Dec 2005

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new_beau said:

Doctor Sam said:
Baghair

guzar to jaye gi tere baghair bhi lekin
bohat udaas bohat bay-qaraar guzray gi..

TERE

Tere baaray mainn Jub Socha nahin tha
Mainn Tanha tha, Magar itna nahin tha

tanha

tanha na kat sakey ga karhi dhoop ka safar
sar per khiyaal e......ki chadar hi lay chalain

Posted 02 Dec 2005

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tanha na kat sakey ga karhi dhoop ka safar
sar per khiyaal e......ki chadar hi lay chalain

WRONG SHAIR...

"yunn kis tarah katay ga kari dhoop ka safar"

Asal Misra yeh hay ,...

Posted 03 Dec 2005

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sar

qatil mera nisshan mitanay pe hey bazid
main bhi sinaan ki nok pe sar chord jaoon ga..

Posted 03 Dec 2005

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"Mujh ko jinhonn nay Qatel kiya hay Koi Unhainn Batalye Qateel
Meri Laash kay Pehloo mainn woh apna khanjar bhool gaye"

Posted 03 Dec 2005

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ki meray qatal kay baad oos nay jafa say touba
haye oos zood o pasheman ka pasheman hona

Posted 03 Dec 2005

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QATAL

qatal karkay jo chala rooth kay dilbar mujh sey
khoon dorha mera kaatil ko mananey kay liay

Posted 03 Dec 2005

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very Nice shaur HKB

"Lay chala jaan meri, ROOTH kay jaanay tera"
"Aisay aanay say tou behtar tha, na aana tera"

Posted 04 Dec 2005

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lay gaey JAAN meri keh keh kar yahi
bina dil kay JAAN kia karo gay tum

Posted 04 Dec 2005

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samajh nahinn aayee

TUM,

Tum meri zindagi ho, yeh such hay
Zindagi ka magar Bharosa Kiay ?

Posted 04 Dec 2005

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