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aslam o alaikum to janubaba family ghulami main na kaam aaein tadbeerain na taqdeerain is shair main sey aik lafz select kar rahi hoon
jati [ sey shair hai];;
dil sey daikhi nahin jati khamoshi ghar ki so lets play
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new_beau said: samajh nahinn aayee
there was some typing mistake, now i have adit ,srry
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Jurm-e-ulfat pay loag hamaiaN saza detey haiN
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yaad e mazi azab hai tarab
chheen lay mujh say hafza mera
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CHEEN
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chheen kay gaya kon tera chain-o-qaraar
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kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
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which lafz was this...
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qv ne jo sher kaha hey, usmain se koi bhi lafz lain ... aor aisa sher likhain jismain wo lafz aata ho..
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QUEEN VICTORIA said: kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
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NAQSH faryadi hai kiss ki shokhi e tehreer ka
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QUEEN VICTORIA said: kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
kiran said: which lafz was this...
Doctor Sam said: qv ne jo sher kaha hey, usmain se koi bhi lafz lain ... aor aisa sher likhain jismain wo lafz aata ho..
Hum tou lay lainn gay koi lafz BUT KIRAN ASKED keh QV nay ooper waalay shair mainn say konsa LAFZ lay ker next shair likha hay
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SALL said: NAQSH faryadi hai kiss ki shokhi e tehreer ka
TASVEER
"Dononn kay Husn mainn koi Kami nahin"
"Tu bhi Haseenn aur teri Tasveer bhi Haseenn"
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new_beau said: Hum tou lay lainn gay koi lafz BUT KIRAN ASKED keh QV nay ooper waalay shair mainn say konsa LAFZ lay ker next shair likha hay
new_beau said: Apni Zulfonn ki zanjeeronn say Rehayee day dou
QUEEN VICTORIA said: kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
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hawwa ki beti said: suna
TAMASHA
Khaak mainn mil kay bhi Zahir na ho sakay
Ta,aasha yeh kisi ko Tamaasha nahin laga
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MTB
kiss ki hui
dasht e ghurbat mein hein aur ranj e safar khenchte hein
baar e hasti hai jisse KHAAK basa khenchte hein
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dasht
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ohhhhhh so nice shaing
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Faizan Rana said: ohhhhhh so nice shaing
Come ...be a part of Chain
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Doctor Sam said: dasht
Zulmaat
"Tareekiyaann Jholi Phailaye Baithi hainn Ashar
Koi Jugnu hi Daaman-e-Zulmaat mainn DaaLA jAYE"
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Faizan Rana said: ohhhhhh so nice shaing
ok jaise aap ki marzi
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U R Welcome jee :D
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Doctor Sam said: dasht
Koi
koi surat nazar nahin aati
koi umeed bar nahin aati ,
moot ka aik din mutaaen hai
nend kyun raat bar nahin aati
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Doctor Sam said: dasht
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