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shy_princess

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jagtey ankhoun kai bhi kuch khawaab hoova kartey hain.
zaroori tou nahin haar koi roo kai deekhai
sookhi ankhoun main bhi sailaab hoova kartey hain.
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aik baat kahoun ager sunatey hoo



Posted 06 Dec 2003

shukaar hai kissey ko tu maira khiyal hai
Posted 21 Feb 2004

mg muje kuch nai maloom..
Posted 22 Feb 2004

mansoor ghouri said:

eray hum bhi bathay hay rahoo may lakin app ki nazeray karem he nahi hotti

and hooray yar tumhay seb malum hay eray wohi or kon ho sekta hay


arey app tu pehli duffa rahoun main aye hain
tu nazeer bhi pard gai hummarey
warna app tu hummarey forum main attey hey nahin
Posted 22 Feb 2004

arey me back aur potry bhi back soo
aik qaweeta hazeer-e-khidmaat hai
Posted 25 Feb 2004

Yadein pagaal kaar daitey hain
Baatein pagaal kaar daitey hain

Chehra hosh urdha daita hai
Ankhain pagaal kaar daitey hain

Paidaal chalney walloun ko
Rahein pagaal kaar daitey hain

Din tu khair guzaar jatta hai
Ratein pagaal kaar daitey hain



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Posted 25 Feb 2004

jaab chouti chouti batoun main tum haanstey rootey thai
                   taab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
jaab bin mousam barsaton main hum jhom jhom kai gatey thai
                  taab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
jaab chup kai adhi ratoon main chaat pai tarey gintai thai
                   taab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
               abb tu khud bhi bhool chukka houn
                   kaab sai tum sai pyaar kiya hai
               baas itna hey keh sakta houn ………..
                   sirf tum sai pyaar kiya hai
                     sirf tum sai pyaar kiya hai

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Posted 25 Feb 2004

ego yaar main ager wapis aa gai houn tu tum kahan gaibb hoo
i m missing you
Posted 25 Feb 2004

aray han ego kafi din se nazr nai aye..
Posted 25 Feb 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
app nay bolaya ham chaly ayeee
Posted 25 Feb 2004

egoistguy4 says
shy_princess said:

ego yaar main ager wapis aa gai houn tu tum kahan gaibb hoo
i m missing you

THANKX SHY ,MUJHAY YAQEEN HAI TUM WAQAI MAIN MISS KAR RAHIHO GI MUJHAY.LAKIN TUM TU KUMKUM ATTI HO,AUR BAQEOON KAH SATH MERA DIL NAHIN LUGTA.JUB MERI KOI AHMIAT HI NAHIN BAQION KI NAZAR MAIN TU .ISS LIAY MAIN PARHTA SUBKAY MESSEGE HOON LAKIN MESSEGE LIKHNA CHOOR DIAY HAIN.
Posted 25 Feb 2004

Ego yeh ap kaisi batein kar rae ho..?
Posted 25 Feb 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
tumhay main bhool jaoon aur

writes "kabhi socha hay ye tum nay
agar hum mil bhee jain tau
guzara ho nahin sakta
na tum khud ko meray sanchay main dhalo gi
na main apni rawish ko chor paoon ga
tum apnay husn par nazaa n
main apni aqal par fakhir
youn hum apni jaga donon
aana kay khol main liptay huay
resham kay keeray hain
na mumkin compromise
na samjhotay ki gunjaish
tau bilaakhir yahi hoga
kay hum donon juda hongay
tau kia behter nahi hay ye
kay hum donon bicharnay ki
azeeat say hee na guzrain
na tum ko yaad aaon main
na mujh ko yaad aao tum
tumhay main bhool jaoon aur
mujhay bhee bhool jao tum

Posted 26 Feb 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
sham howa tum agaoo

writes "Sham howay tum a gaoo
kuch batain hain kuch yadain hain
is maan kay mandar kay andar
aik maan ki devi rehty hai
jo ab tak muj say roothy hai..
meri baat suno
gusa choro
gar waqat milay tu yeh soocho
woh phool
woh kagaz kay tukray
woh chan lamhoon ki khus fehmi
woh sari omer ka pachtawa
woh pagal awara sa larka
pharta tha teray rastoon par
jisay dekh kay tum hans deety thein
aur sath main yeh kehty thein
meri baat sunoo
mujhay janay do
yeh phool
yeh kagiz kay tukaray
sab teray hain sab meray hain
mujhay rehna band dareechoon main jehaan sans bhi leena mushkil hai
main naam kisi kay aur likhi tera naam bhi leena mushkil hai
meray khuwab bhi saray gharwi hain
Haan Haan
main janta hoon main manta hoon teri batien sari sachi hain.
tum samnay a kar betho tu
tumhain samnay dekh kay ro leain gain aik lafz na monh say bolain gain
sham howay tum ajao

Posted 26 Feb 2004

it is really superb
thanx soffia keep writting
aur mg jee app bhi kuch ershaad karein
Posted 27 Feb 2004

egoistguy4 says
YEH DIL KI RAH,YEH URTA GHUBAR KISS KA HAI.
WOH JA CHUKA HAI TU PHIR INTEZAR KISS KA HAI.
NAHIN WOH APNA,MAGAR USS KI RAH BHI DAIKHOON.
DIL-O-NAZAR PAY BHALA IKHTIAR KISS KA HAI.
Posted 02 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
NA RASTAY MAIN HI THARAIN,NA APNAY GHAR JAIN.
YEH FAISLAY KI GHARI HAI KAH UB BIKHAR JAIN.
TERA WAJOOD BHI SUCH MAIN MAGAR HUMAIN TUM SAY.
WOH ISHQ HAI KAH TUMHAIN SOCH KAR HI MAR JAINNN.
Posted 02 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
na meray qalam say likhi gai,na meri zaban say ada hoi.
jo nazar say kahnay ki baat hai,kissi harf main na samay gi.
koi phool chunta kiss tarah,koi dhool hota hai kiss tarah.
yeh tu waqt waqt ki baat hai,tujhay zindagi hi batay gi.
Posted 02 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
ghalat fehmi nay batoon ko barha dala yoonhi warna.
kaha kuch aur tha,woh kuch aur samjha,mujhay kuch aur kahna tha.
kahan uss nay suni meri,suni bhi un suni kar dii.
ussay malooom tha itnaaaa,,,mujhay kuch aur kahna tha.
Posted 02 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
shy_princess said:

it is really superb
thanx soffia keep writting
aur mg jee app bhi kuch ershaad karein

ARAY HUM HAIN NAAAA.
Posted 02 Mar 2004

tumhaara tu appna forum hai tumhain kehnai key zaroorat nahin pardhatey
joo nahin likhatey unhain kehna pardhta hai duffer samjha karoo nah
any ways achi poetry hai
Posted 02 Mar 2004

aab aap keh rahi ho tu achi hi ho gie :)
Posted 02 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
WARMTH OF LOVE said:

aab aap keh rahi ho tu achi hi ho gie :)

ARAY WOL APP TENSION NAHIN LOO WOH POETRY SIRF ZOOQ WALOON,AUR AQALMANDOON KAY LIAY ACHI HAI,AGAR APP KO ACHI NAHIN LUGI TU KOI PROBLEM NAHIN.
Posted 02 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
shy_princess said:

tumhaara tu appna forum hai tumhain kehnai key zaroorat nahin pardhatey
joo nahin likhatey unhain kehna pardhta hai duffer samjha karoo nah
any ways achi poetry hai

ARAY APUN KO MASKA NAHIN LUGANAY KA,AUR HAAN TERAY KO KITNI BAAR BOLA MERA REAL NAME(DUFFER) SUB KAY SAMNAY NAHIN LAINAY KA.
Posted 02 Mar 2004

ARAY WOL APP TENSION NAHIN LOO WOH POETRY SIRF ZOOQ WALOON,AUR AQALMANDOON KAY LIAY ACHI HAI,AGAR APP KO ACHI NAHIN LUGI TU KOI PROBLEM NAHIN.

aray tenstion kon lay raha hay bahi ... hum tu tension na laytay hein na kisi ko daynay daytay hein :) quite wired na but have some meanings ... ;) but .. yeh tu samajhdar bandoun ko hi samajh aa sakta hay kiun :)

aur wasay bhi ... how u doing ?

Posted 03 Mar 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
shy_princess said:

it is really superb
thanx soffia keep writting
aur mg jee app bhi kuch ershaad karein

thanxxxxxxxx


Meri Yaad ..

>

>Sheeshe k mahal ki deewaron main

>tanha yaad karoge tum

>bhooli bisri baaton ko

>phir se yaad karoge tum

>

>Chand bhi shola ban k dehke ga

>chaandni aag lagaegi

>garmi ke aise aalam main

>Thandi saans bharoge tum

>

>tere mahal ka har sheesha

>mera .. pata jab poochega

>dil ke aayene pe jhuk-ke

>mujhse baat karoge tum

>

>raat ka mausaam jab jab

>yaadon ki gard laega

>mera naam mita ke har baar

>baar baar likhoge tum

>

>Kiran duaon ka baadal banke

>ek din jab ur jaaegi

>dono haath uthake rab se

>phir faryaad karoge tum


Posted 03 Mar 2004

raat ka mausaam jab jab

yaadon ki gard laega

mera naam mita ke har baar

baar baar likhoge tum

Good work done (Y)
Posted 03 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
mansoor ghouri said:

DUFFER paa gee humay kessi nay app ka real name jo kay DUFFER hay nahi bataya humay ya bhi nahi malum kay app ko seb DUFFER kahtay hay or kessi ko plz batana bhi nahi kay app ko DUFFER kahtay hay werna seb he app ko DUFFER kahay gay phir app ko gusa aey ga kay seb mujay DUFFER kahtay hay es liya kessi ko nahi malum kay app ko DUFFER kahtay hay

dakha manay app ka name bhi nahi liya or apna kam bhi ho giya hay na paa gee joke

ARAY MG JI AISAY EACH NAHIN KARNAY KA.
Posted 03 Mar 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Posted 03 Mar 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Posted 04 Mar 2004

egoistguy4 says
mansoor ghouri said:

oh acha yar may tumhara duffer wala name nahi loo ga ub kush

JI HAAN MERA DUFFER WALA NAAM APP LAIN GAY TU,SUB KO MERA DUFFER WALA NAAM PATA CHAL JAY GA.PHIR SUB LOOG MUJHAY DUFFER DUFFER KAH KAR BULAIN GAY,AUR APP KO TU MALOOM HAI KAH APUN KA NAAM TU PARENTS NAY DUFFER RUKHA HAI,LAKIN APUN KO WAISAY DUFFER NAAM PASAND NAHIN HAI.SO PLZ KOI BHI MUJHAY DUFFER KAH KAR NA BULAY PLZ.
Posted 04 Mar 2004

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