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shy_princess

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pyaar karney kai bhi kuch adaab hoova kartey hain
jagtey ankhoun kai bhi kuch khawaab hoova kartey hain.
zaroori tou nahin haar koi roo kai deekhai
sookhi ankhoun main bhi sailaab hoova kartey hain.
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aik baat kahoun ager sunatey hoo



Posted 06 Dec 2003

cutefriend says
koi baat nahi sach hamesha karwa hota hai
Posted 06 Jun 2004

taab hey tu mairey sach sai app ka moun kardwa hoo gaiay
soo sad
Posted 06 Jun 2004

cutefriend says
yeh to ap ka ab syasi byan hai
Posted 06 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
aray tu humarayy country main jamhori nizam hai yahan sub siasii biyanhi tu daitay hain..
Posted 06 Jun 2004

cutefriend says
to tum bhi de do syasi byan
Posted 06 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
haan ji mujhay mohabbat hain un sayyyyyyyyyyyyy....aray yaar iqbal kay shaheenoon say tum ghalat mut samjhoo.
Posted 07 Jun 2004

javad says
lekin humen to unhi say hai
Posted 07 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
oh acha un say app ko ho gai chaloo app hi kar loo hum kissi aur say kar lain gay.
Posted 07 Jun 2004

javad says
yaar lekin tum bhi to kisi un say hi karo gay naa
Posted 07 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
hi
Posted 08 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
hello soffia ji,wellcome back here thankx GOD app ko hum ghareeboon ka bhi khayal ayyya.
Posted 08 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
lolz   ...thanx dear
how are u
Posted 08 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
I stand still, waiting...
For what, you ask?
For you to remember me,
As more than a daily task.

Remember when you loved me?
When, between us, all was right?
Or was that some lucid dream,
That I had on some cold night?

The snow stopped in the sky,
And the rain stopped,
mid-atmosphere.
The seasons stopped, in my eyes,
When you walked away from here.

So, I stand on someone's canvas,
Dead, in shades of black and gray.
The Artist just dropped the paintbrush,
As He turned and walked away.

I cannot sit down, I cannot talk,
As I see you leave me behind...
Everything was just so animated,
A few moments ago in time.
Posted 08 Jun 2004

thanx soffia for comming back
Posted 09 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
soffia786 said:

lolz   ...thanx dear
how are u

I AM ALWAYS GOOD AND WAT ABT UR SELF??
Posted 09 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
soffia786 said:

I stand still, waiting...
For what, you ask?
For you to remember me,
As more than a daily task.

Remember when you loved me?
When, between us, all was right?
Or was that some lucid dream,
That I had on some cold night?

The snow stopped in the sky,
And the rain stopped,
mid-atmosphere.
The seasons stopped, in my eyes,
When you walked away from here.

So, I stand on someone's canvas,
Dead, in shades of black and gray.
The Artist just dropped the paintbrush,
As He turned and walked away.

I cannot sit down, I cannot talk,
As I see you leave me behind...
Everything was just so animated,
A few moments ago in time.

nice nice soffia ji
Posted 09 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
shy_princess said:

thanx soffia for comming back

...thanx for your love dear
Posted 09 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
egoistguy4 said:

soffia786 said:

lolz   ...thanx dear
how are u

I AM ALWAYS GOOD AND WAT ABT UR SELF??
me 2   fine lik a sun shine.......
Posted 09 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
egoistguy4 said:

soffia786 said:

I stand still, waiting...
For what, you ask?
For you to remember me,
As more than a daily task.

Remember when you loved me?
When, between us, all was right?
Or was that some lucid dream,
That I had on some cold night?

The snow stopped in the sky,
And the rain stopped,
mid-atmosphere.
The seasons stopped, in my eyes,
When you walked away from here.

So, I stand on someone's canvas,
Dead, in shades of black and gray.
The Artist just dropped the paintbrush,
As He turned and walked away.

I cannot sit down, I cannot talk,
As I see you leave me behind...
Everything was just so animated,
A few moments ago in time.

nice nice soffia ji
thanx dear
Posted 09 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Posted 09 Jun 2004

ego kuch sharm kaar loo abb tum bhi koi tazaa kalaam bhaij doo
Posted 10 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
aray nahin main nay likhna choor dia hai apun nahin likha ga ub.jub tukhoor ji nahin kahein gii
Posted 10 Jun 2004

hoor kahan hoo
abb aa bhi jao wapis
Posted 10 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Posted 10 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
very nice soffia ji
Posted 10 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
thanx dear
Posted 10 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
waisay yeh kalam kiss ka hai plz yeh bhi sath main likha karein..
Posted 10 Jun 2004

javad says
asslam u aalikum
Posted 10 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
W.SALLAM JAVAD JI JEETAY RAHAIN
Posted 15 Jun 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
w/salam
Posted 15 Jun 2004

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