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shy_princess

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pyaar karney kai bhi kuch adaab hoova kartey hain
jagtey ankhoun kai bhi kuch khawaab hoova kartey hain.
zaroori tou nahin haar koi roo kai deekhai
sookhi ankhoun main bhi sailaab hoova kartey hain.
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aik baat kahoun ager sunatey hoo



Posted 06 Dec 2003

subha says
sirf shy ji hi kiyoon aap bi likho na
Posted 23 Dec 2003

egoistguy4 says
ARAY SUBHU JI MERAY PASS ITNA TIME NAHIN HOTA STUDIES MAIN BUSY HOTA HOON NA ISS LIAY.YEH TU KUCH DOST BUN GAY HAI TEEN PAR IS LIAY AA JATA HOOON
Posted 23 Dec 2003

subha says
ok
Pyar Chupta Nahin Chapaney Sai ...

Pooch Lo Tum Bhi Is Zamane Say,
Piyaar Chupta Nahin Chupane Say.

Paas Aatey Ho Choote Ho Baat Karte Ho,
Kabhi Matlab Say Kabhi Bahaaney Say.

Piyaar Dil Mein Hai To Lao Zubaan Pey,
Aag Badhti Hai Ye Bujhaaney Sey.

Tumhein Na Paana Shayad Behtar Hai,
Paa Ke Phir Se Tumhein Ganwaney Sey.

Chalo Ek Dua To Apni Poori Huiey,
Mil Liye Apne Ek Deewaaney Sey.

Roye Jatey Ho, Bas Roye Jatey Ho,
Kya Hoga Ye Dhan Lutaaney Sey.

Karo Koshish Ki Kurbatein Hi Rahein,
Dooriyan Badh Jaati Hain Badhaaney Sey.

Kya Sunaayein Kisi Ko Raaz-e-Dil,
Dard Bhi Badhta Hai Sunaaney Sey.

Bhool Jaao Kar Ke Achha Hai
Ehsaan Rehta Nahin Jataaney Sey.

Posted 23 Dec 2003

egoistguy4 says
good yaar subha tum tu achi khassii poetry janti hoo yaar.khushi hoi tum say mill kay
Posted 24 Dec 2003

tani says
USAY QAREEB SAY DAIKHA TO HOA YEH MAHSOOS                                                                              YEH SHAKHS DOOR HI SAY ACHA DIKHAI DAITA HAI
Posted 24 Dec 2003

tani says
KAISA LAGA.......
Posted 24 Dec 2003

egoistguy4 says
WAH WAH WAH AINDA MUT BHAIJNA TANI HUMAIN ITNI ACHI POETRY SAMAJH NAHIN ATTIegoistguy437979.9883564815
Posted 24 Dec 2003

subha says

hi
to aap ki samajh may nazam nahi ati
laikan mujhay to nazam pasand hain

aap ko kaun se shair pasand hain??
Posted 25 Dec 2003

subha says
Udaas Rehti Hoon ...

Kiya Main Udas Rehti Hoon???????
kabhi kabhi asa bhi hota hai
main wajood se shaoor se muntashier hoo ker
akser poochti hoon khud se
kiya main udass rehti hoon
kiya tumhara intezar kerti hoon
kiya khawab tumharey dekhti hoon
kiya ansoon se ghabrati hoon
kabhi jheelo kay kinarey tenha
janay se der jati hoon
kay kahin wo tumhara na poochain
akser asa hota hai
lawn ki narm ghans pe bheth ker
akser asa soochti hoon
tumhray chehery ko talashti hoon
chand se shikwa kertii hoon
main khud main hi ghum rehti hoon
hathoon ki lakiroon ko takti rehti hoon
main akser tenha rehti hoon
duniya se chupna chati hoon
kay kahin wo tumhara na pooche bathain
magar phir yehi khayal ata hai
kiya main udass rehti hoon ???????????
ye tu mujhe khud bhi nahi maloom
bus tum ko soochti rehti hoon.............
haan phir shayad udass rehti hoon....
Posted 25 Dec 2003

subha says
shy khan gaib hain kuch din se unnon ne kuch post nahi kiya?
Posted 25 Dec 2003

are subha hum her waqut yahan hey hootey hain post nahin kiya tu kya hoova tum nai joo kaar diya
Posted 25 Dec 2003

tani said:

USAY QAREEB SAY DAIKHA TO HOA YEH MAHSOOS                                                                                         YEH SHAKHS DOOR HI SAY ACHA DIKHAI DAITA HAI



tani mujhey tum sai yeah hey umed the
yaar ego tum ess key shairey per gour nah karoo
samjh nahin anney wali
subha tumharey shirey ka tu jawab hey nahin
bohat acha likhtey hoo
posts kartey rehna haan i want to add u
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aik baat kahoun ager sunatey hoooo
Posted 25 Dec 2003

tani says
SHY ji aap ko shair pasand nahi aaya,i am sorry ,chalain doosra shair hazir-a-khidmat hai.
Posted 25 Dec 2003

tani says
meri ankhoon mein anso pighalta raha,chand julta raha                                                                   teri yadoon ka suraj nikalta raha,chand julta raha                                                                                 yeh december kay jis ki karri dhoop bhi meethi lagnay lagay                                                                                             tum nahi to december sulagta raha,chand julta raha
Posted 25 Dec 2003

subha says
nice






Meri ankhoon kay siwa duniya may rakha kia hai ?
kiya rakha hay


Posted 25 Dec 2003

tani says
meri khushboo tumhay kholay gi to yaad aaoon ga                                                                   tum agar khud say na bolo gay to yaad aaoon ga                                                                                                      shaal pahnaay ga aab kuan december mein tumhay                                                                   barishoon mein kabhi bhigo kay to yaad aaoon ga
Posted 25 Dec 2003

subha says
tnx shy jee
laikan yeh meri shairi nahi






shy_princess said:

tani said:

USAY QAREEB SAY DAIKHA TO HOA YEH MAHSOOS                                                                                                  YEH SHAKHS DOOR HI SAY ACHA DIKHAI DAITA HAI



tani mujhey tum sai yeah hey umed the
yaar ego tum ess key shairey per gour nah karoo
samjh nahin anney wali
subha tumharey shirey ka tu jawab hey nahin
bohat acha likhtey hoo
posts kartey rehna haan i want to add u
___________________
shy_princess
[email protected]
aik baat kahoun ager sunatey hoooo
Posted 25 Dec 2003

tani says
subha said:

nice






Meri ankhoon kay siwa duniya may rakha kia hai ?
kiya rakha hay


KUCH BHI NAHI.......
Posted 25 Dec 2003

tani says
TUMHARI AANKH SAY DIL TAK SAFFER KARNA HAI BAS HUM KO                                                                   YEH KITNI KHUBSOORAT MANZALOON KA RAASTA HO GA
Posted 25 Dec 2003

egoistguy4 says
tani said:

TUMHARI AANKH SAY DIL TAK SAFFER KARNA HAI BAS HUM KO                                                                          YEH KITNI KHUBSOORAT MANZALOON KA RAASTA HO GA


    BUS JI UBB WAPIS AA JAO AJJKUL TRAFFIC ZIADA HAI ACCIDENT BUHAT HOO RAHAY HAIN
Posted 25 Dec 2003

tani says
HUSAN KUCH AUR SIMAT AATA HAI IN AANKHOON MEIN                                                                   MUSKARATAY HOAY JUB BAAT CHUPAAY KOI
Posted 26 Dec 2003

tani says
NIZAKAT NAZNINOON KI CHUPANAY SAY NAHI CHUPTI                                                                   KHUDA JUB HUSAN DAITA HAI NIZAKAT AA HI JATI HAI
Posted 26 Dec 2003

egoistguy4 says
TANI JI MUJHAY BUHAT AFSOOS HOA SUN KAR KAY APP JAA RAHI HAIN.APP KAY COMPANY BUHAT ACHI RAHI MAIN HAMASHA YAAD RAKHOON GA.ZINDAGI KA PATA NAHIN ISS LIAY APP KAY MANA KARNAY KAY BAWAJOOD BYE ZAROOR KAHOON GA.BEST WISHES FOR U.JAHAN RAHOO KHUSH RAHO.BYE BYE.
Posted 27 Dec 2003

egoistguy4 says
SHY I MISS U YAAR.AA JAO JALDI SAY.AUR MAIN TUMHARAY LIAY DUAGOO HOON KAH TUM JALDI SAY BILKUL THEEK HOO JAO.AMEEN SUMA AMEEN
Posted 27 Dec 2003

egoistguy4 says
AUR PLZ MERI APP SUB SAY REQUEST HAI KAH APP LOOG SHY KAY LIAY DUA KAREIN WOH KAFI SERIOUS BEMAAR HAI.ALLAH USSAY SHAFA DAY.AMEEN.
Posted 27 Dec 2003

tani says
GET WELL SOON FOR SHY.
Posted 27 Dec 2003

tani says
REALLY ,MERI ZINDAGI KA PATA NAHI,KIA PATA TUM MUJH MASOOM KO ZINDA RAHNAY DO YA NAHI,AGAR TUM MUJHAY DARANAY AA GIAY TO....... MERA DIL BARA KAMZOR HAItani37982.6998611111
Posted 27 Dec 2003

skyrider26 says
get well soon.
whos sick there?
Posted 27 Dec 2003

tani says
DEAR FRIENDS I WILL MISS U ALL
Posted 27 Dec 2003

tani says
I am leaving today to meet you all tomorrow ....in future.                                                                                              ....and this is the thinking which sooths me
Posted 27 Dec 2003

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