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Rain Man

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Posted 09 Mar 2004

Ashii says
þSÿÇHØ said:

when somebody says "did u write it"
i feel so proud, cuz that only means that they're thinkin, its so good it can't be his own...when i know its mine...


iss ka matlab yeh bhi ho sakta hai k
me aap ko akalmand samjhi thi






Posted 18 May 2004

Rain Man says
exactly...
cuz only smart ppl can play with words
not sall dull
Posted 18 May 2004

Ashii says
haaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..
im dullllll
duullllllll
beryy berryyyy duuulllllllllllllll

kya takleef hai ???
Posted 18 May 2004

þSÿÇHØ said:

when somebody says "did u write it"
i feel so proud, cuz that only means that they're thinkin, its so good it can't be his own...when i know its mine...
ne ways thanks angel



your welcome!
Posted 18 May 2004

Shararti says
SALL said:

haaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..
im dullllll
duullllllll
beryy berryyyy duuulllllllllllllll

kya takleef hai ???


Tabeyat tu thaik hai?
aaj sach he boltay ja rahay hain?
Posted 18 May 2004

Ashii says

tabiyat bohot kharab hai
2 k 4 nazar aa rahe hein
236 bukhar hai
Posted 18 May 2004

Rain Man says
sall kaho to chaar kandhoon ka intezam kardoon
Posted 19 May 2004

Shararti says
SALL said:


tabiyat bohot kharab hai
2 k 4 nazar aa rahe hein
236 bukhar hai


Hairyet ..aap ko tu ab tak foot ho jana chahye tha..aap yahan..kya masla hai?
Posted 19 May 2004

Shararti says
þSÿÇHØ said:

sall kaho to chaar kandhoon ka intezam kardoon



Nahi Inhi gari par lay jayien gay
Posted 19 May 2004

Ashii says



kyaaaa na..
itni jaldi pari hai mere kul k chawal khane ki



dont worry,, na kandhe, na gari
hum khud chale jate hein

jiss dhaj se koi maktal mei gaya,
woh shaan salamat rehti hai
iss jaan ka yaro kya kehna
iss jaan ki to koi baat nahi

adaab arz hai
Posted 19 May 2004

Rain Man says
wat is Dhaj n Maktal
Posted 20 May 2004

Ashii says
uuffffffffffff..

DHAJ --> saj dhaj... shaan o shokat,,
in simple words --> STYLE

MAKTAL comes of KATAL..
matlab k jiss jaga pe katal kiya jae..


now read it again



Posted 20 May 2004

WAFA says
Posted 20 May 2004

Rain Man says
now its a good one, firt two lines matches me perfect
Posted 21 May 2004

Ashii says
wafa ko kya hua




these 4 lines matches me perfectly
aur waise bhi mera sher hai

zyada shyan pati ki na to tum pe chor du gi
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
nahin nahin mein masoom sa ek bachcha hoon jo 3 post tak spammin karne wala hai
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
3
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
2
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
1
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
///
Posted 21 May 2004

Ashii says

vv vvvvvvvv nice..
ehemm --> it s not urs





yeh pehle kya tha ??
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
its mine ofcourse sall, all the poems i've posted so long are all mine...written by me n only me...i'm the best

pehle kya pehle
Posted 21 May 2004

WAFA says
HOWWWWW ROMANTIC......(EXCEPT THE LAST LINE )
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
chalo jisse jo pasand aajaye
Posted 21 May 2004

Brokensoul says
sall ko complain karnaki aadhat pad gayi hai. Nice work bro
Posted 21 May 2004

Ashii says
me to mazak karti hu bass



ab nahi kahu gi kuch bhi..
Posted 21 May 2004

Brokensoul says
sorry :P i was just pickin on you too. what good is this place if we cant do that :)
Posted 21 May 2004

Rain Man says
thanks broken
i don't have the old ones saved, but i'll keep writtin the new ones
koi baat nahin sall, lagi raho
Posted 22 May 2004

Ashii says
me phir se majak kar rahi thi na
Posted 23 May 2004

Rain Man says
majak nahin hota mazak hota hai
Posted 24 May 2004

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