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Rain Man

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Posted 09 Mar 2004

Rain Man says
mera hona to unbelieveable hai...
ok sad poem soon will arrive
tab tak keep it up sall
Posted 27 Apr 2004

subha says
I’m still alive.
There’s so much going through my mind.
I’m still alive.
There’s no place to cry.
The tears fall when I walk.
You’re no longer there to talk.




GOOD YAS


( saare mil k ro'ain ab )


heheheh mujhay rona nahi a raha Sallo
Posted 27 Apr 2004

subha says
Tum se bichar k main kiya hoon

ik adhori nazaam ka misrah

yah koi beemar parinda

kapi mein aik zinda tittli

yah ik murda pila patha

ankhen hoon main khwaab zada si

yah ankhoon mein koi tota sapna

palkoon ki deewar k pichay

pagal qaidi yah ik aanso

dhoop mein liptah lanba sehra

yah pir khofzada sa bacha

tooti hoi chori ka tukra

yah koi bhola bisra vadah

tum hi batao

tum sey bichar k main kiya hoon

aik purani qabar ka qutba

yah koi mathrook dua
Posted 27 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
Thanks subha

ok here is n other sad one...


TUMNE JO AKELA CHORD DIYA
AISA LAGA SAB KUCH LOOT GAYA
TUMNE NAZREIN JO PHER LEIN
HUMARE LIYE DUNYA MIT GAYEE
TUMNE JO HUMEIN YOON BHULAYA
HUMARE LIYE JAISE...
MAUT KA PEGHAM HAI AAYA...


ok i just made this up right now, so maybe won't be that cool, but m workin on the next poem
Posted 27 Apr 2004

subha says
com com jii
nice
Posted 27 Apr 2004

tarash says
nice collection
Posted 27 Apr 2004

Brokensoul says
subha said:

com com jii
nice




me and my dirty mind
Posted 27 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
Posted 27 Apr 2004

subha says
Brokensoul said:

subha said:

com com jii
nice




me and my dirty mind



Posted 28 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
,,,
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Guest_002 says
to tab tayali he death ti yach?
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
mude tuch tamuj tain taya
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Guest_002 says
aap to b nai aya?
talo mitti pao
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Guest_002 says
ait to
log titna hachtey hen uphoooooooo
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
khush rehna is good for health
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Guest_002 says
but good things r not for devil na yach
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
ofcourse they are
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Guest_002 says
no no no they arnt
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Ashii says
this one s nice
Posted 28 Apr 2004

nice poetry
Posted 28 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
thanks
ather dekhlo tumhare matlab ki love poem hai
Posted 29 Apr 2004

Ashii says
han na..
jali hui








khehehekeheekheekeekhekeheee...



oupss.. ninuuuuuu timmmmmmmmmee
Posted 30 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
go to sleep sall, die brainless die
Posted 30 Apr 2004

Ashii says
haaaaaaae lutt ja'ain ge
hum to mit jaaaaaaa'ain ge
aisi baaaaaatein kiya na karrroooooooo

Posted 30 Apr 2004

Rain Man says
sahi hai tumhari marzi jo karna hai karo
Posted 01 May 2004

Ashii says
na rawaaa kahiye
na sazaa kahiye
kahiye kahiye,, mujhe bura kahiye..

dil mein rakhne ki baat hai gham e ishq
iss ko harr giz na barmala kahiye
kahiye kahiye,, mujhe bura kahiye..

aa gai aap ko maseehai
marne walon ko marhaba kahiye
kahiye kahiye,, mujhe bura kahiye..


Posted 01 May 2004

Rain Man says
sall itne mushkil poetry kyon likhti ho
Posted 01 May 2004

Ashii says
areyyy,, iss mei first 2 line k ilawa kya mushkil hai
khopri ko hilaya karo thora
Posted 01 May 2004

Rain Man says
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Posted 01 May 2004

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