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Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Posted on 10/11/2005 9:36:01 AM
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Allah Kerayyyyyyyyyyyy...Allah Kerayyyy/.///

Tenoonnnn...


Allah Kerayyyyyyyyyyyy



Man ki Muraad Mil Jaye



Aameen ....Good Effort
Posted on 10/11/2005 8:15:33 PM
Thanks a lot bro mein ne abhi tak aap ka naam to jana he nahee so plz bhai tell me urs?
Posted on 10/11/2005 11:18:37 PM
"Rizwan Iqbal"

PEN NAME

Rizwan Ashar
Posted on 10/13/2005 2:29:23 AM
Thanks 4 telling bro
Posted on 10/13/2005 11:42:31 AM
Posted on 10/13/2005 11:44:12 AM
nice
Posted on 10/14/2005 2:29:08 PM
Virdan:
Thanks 4 telling bro


Felcome jee
Posted on 10/14/2005 7:48:08 PM
"Shama ko bhi bara pyaar hay perwaanay say
uss ki Mohabbat ka hay andaaz magar rulaanay wala"



Iss Ghazal Baar baar perho...Wazan theek hya..Issay Terteeb ki Zaroorat hay...Terteeb ka matlab.."GHANAYEEYET" hay...

Iss mainn Khayal acha hay ..Magar NAGHMAGI nahin hay ..Lafzonn ki Terteeb ko Aagay peechay ker kay iss mainn RYHTHEM paida kero...Its really a good Ghazal
Posted on 10/14/2005 7:51:13 PM
new_beau:
"Shama ko bhi bara pyaar hay perwaanay say
uss ki Mohabbat ka hay andaaz magar rulaanay wala"



Iss Ghazal Baar baar perho...Wazan theek hya..Issay Terteeb ki Zaroorat hay...Terteeb ka matlab.."GHANAYEEYET" hay...

Iss mainn Khayal acha hay ..Magar NAGHMAGI nahin hay ..Lafzonn ki Terteeb ko Aagay peechay ker kay iss mainn RYHTHEM paida kero...Its really a good Ghazal


shukriya paa jee paa jee aap kafi kamm choor ho gaiay hain har kaam mujh se he karatay hain kabhi koi kaam khud bhi kar liya keejiyay aiy kamm hun aapi karo tussi mairay kolo nai hunda
Posted on 10/14/2005 11:02:20 PM
Phir meray Khaatay mainn kaam daal diya

Achha je kertyay hainn..saber kerainn thora
Posted on 10/15/2005 8:49:03 PM
jee jee paa jee kiyon nahee sabar hum kar saktay hain
Posted on 10/15/2005 11:16:34 PM
Posted on 10/15/2005 11:27:17 PM
Posted on 10/15/2005 11:34:13 PM
Hachhi Hay....







Aray Waqayee Achhi hay Jeeee   
Posted on 10/16/2005 7:39:42 PM
Thanks a lot Bro
Posted on 10/17/2005 12:57:29 PM
Felcome jee...
Posted on 10/17/2005 11:07:42 PM
nice very nice
Posted on 10/18/2005 5:05:28 PM
Taza Ghazal kahan hay jee...Waiting....
Posted on 10/18/2005 10:18:17 PM
INSHA ALLAH JALD AA JAIAY GI
Posted on 10/19/2005 1:49:11 AM
boohat jaldi ani chahiye...

intezar hai lafzoon ka jo dil pe lagain
perh ke jinko hum kuch bi na keh sakain
Posted on 10/20/2005 4:43:49 PM
Bara Aajzi bhara Shair hay Kiran jee...Agar uss nay FIRE maar diya tou kiya kerainn gi aap
Posted on 10/20/2005 10:41:13 PM
kiran:
boohat jaldi ani chahiye...

intezar hai lafzoon ka jo dil pe lagain
perh ke jinko hum kuch bi na keh sakain


Jee Insha Allah per kindly aap mujh se aisi koi tawaqo na rakhein mairay lafz to shaid bilkul aam se hotayhain aur shair thori hon koi kehsome thing special kar guzro khair apni se koshash karo ga Insha Allah
Posted on 10/21/2005 6:40:08 PM
kiran:
nice very nice

thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry keh lon agar apa log ajazat dein to
Posted on 10/21/2005 6:42:06 PM
new_beau:
Bara Aajzi bhara Shair hay Kiran jee...Agar uss nay FIRE maar diya tou kiya kerainn gi aap

array kaha bhai Allah Tala maf farmaain itna gunahgaar sa banda hon us ka aur shiri kaha bus be tukki se koshashein karta hon jis mein i know bohat zayda mistakes hoti hain bus aap sab ki muhabbt hay Thanks 4 this
Posted on 10/21/2005 6:46:03 PM
Virdan:
new_beau:
Bara Aajzi bhara Shair hay Kiran jee...Agar uss nay FIRE maar diya tou kiya kerainn gi aap

array kaha bhai Allah Tala maf farmaain itna gunahgaar sa banda hon us ka aur shiri kaha bus be tukki se koshashein karta hon jis mein i know bohat zayda mistakes hoti hain bus aap sab ki muhabbt hay Thanks 4 this


"Dil kay Zakhmonn ko koi shairi kahay Perwah nahin
Takleef tou tub hoti hay jub koi Wah Wah kerta hay"
Posted on 10/21/2005 8:23:07 PM
ha ha ha ha ha shaid aisa he ho per kabhi kabhi bhai takleef ki shidat itni hoti hay keh insan be his ho jata hay
Posted on 10/23/2005 8:13:05 PM
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