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Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

Ab aap Bay Hissi say Baher aatay ho ya SUI lay ker Chubho doon ..

Posted on 10/24/2005 12:39:40 AM

jee jee aa gai hon bhai sui nahee plz sui ka suntay he bahir aa gaya hon kaisa asar hay wah jee wah
Insha Allah 2 din mien send karo ga new poetry bye

Posted on 10/24/2005 6:54:48 PM

ok

Posted on 10/24/2005 8:22:20 PM

lein bhai phir mien send kar raha hon bus bardasht kar leejiayay ga ok

Posted on 10/26/2005 5:39:44 PM


Posted on 10/26/2005 5:42:01 PM

Misronn ki taanagainn bohat lambi hainn..Chhoti kero..

waisay...AS USUAL..khaayaal is very good...

Posted on 10/26/2005 11:55:07 PM

mein to pehlay he kehta hon bhai keh yeh ghaltiyo ka palanda hay really thanks a lot 4 ur comments

Posted on 10/27/2005 1:29:21 PM

waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na

Posted on 10/27/2005 1:35:20 PM

Virdan:



            

Posted on 10/27/2005 3:03:02 PM

Aray Queen_of_JB jee..welcome Wapas..Bohat din baad tashreef layeenn aap...

Posted on 10/27/2005 10:01:03 PM

Virdan:
waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na


Lo Uncle jee...AA BAIL MUJHAY MAAR ker lya hay aap nay..Ab Saber kero...Eid Guzarnay dou...Tumhari Shayer ka Post Martam SHURU

Posted on 10/27/2005 10:03:47 PM

Queen of jb:
Virdan:



              

Thanks a lot aap queen ho so kabhi kabhi sakhawat kar k remarks de diya karo

Posted on 10/28/2005 4:47:16 PM

King of jb:
ahan nice yara

wah wah kaya baat hay isay kehtay hain ik to chupri aur oper se 2 2 wah queen k sath bhi king bhi Masha Allah Thanks 4 remarks dear

Posted on 10/28/2005 4:59:30 PM

new_beau:
Aray Queen_of_JB jee..welcome Wapas..Bohat din baad tashreef layeenn aap...

jee hamari tarf se bhi bohat bohat welcome jee

Posted on 10/28/2005 5:03:29 PM

new_beau:
Virdan:
waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na


Lo Uncle jee...AA BAIL MUJHAY MAAR ker lya hay aap nay..Ab Saber kero...Eid Guzarnay dou...Tumhari Shayer ka Post Martam SHURU

wah wah thanks bhai yahi to mien chahta tha keh is mein itni ghaltiyan hain koi to aisa bhai mil jaiy jo inhain nikal de thanks a lot bro aur han zara zor se marna suna hay aap k seeng kafi lambay ho gaaiy hain

Posted on 10/28/2005 5:07:52 PM

Lekin Mujhay tou Ghaltiyaann nikaalni nahin aatinn





Mainn tou KEERAY nikaalta hoon

Posted on 10/29/2005 12:55:07 AM

new_beau:
Lekin Mujhay tou Ghaltiyaann nikaalni nahin aatinn





Mainn tou KEERAY nikaalta hoon


shukar hay keeray nikaltay hain agar aap is mien se hathi aur shair nikalna shoro kar daitay to mien to gaya tha na kaam se

Posted on 10/29/2005 2:41:44 PM

Kaam say nahin gaya ...Agar Mainn Aisa kerta tou Aap pastol nikaal letay ....

Posted on 10/29/2005 8:59:03 PM

Abhi Jaldi say Poetry Posty kero...werna Chit Chat Topic ban gaya yeh tou UN STICKY ho jaye ga

Posted on 10/29/2005 8:59:39 PM

new_beau:
Kaam say nahin gaya ...Agar Mainn Aisa kerta tou Aap pastol nikaal letay ....

tauba tauba nahee bhai mairi itni jurrat mien to nikalta seedhi toap    

Posted on 10/30/2005 3:57:14 PM

new_beau:
Abhi Jaldi say Poetry Posty kero...werna Chit Chat Topic ban gaya yeh tou UN STICKY ho jaye ga

achha bhai karta hon na yeh bhi masla hay

Posted on 10/30/2005 4:02:05 PM


Posted on 10/30/2005 4:03:16 PM

MashAllah...Very Good...Really very Good....


I really like it....

Rizwan Ashar saheb Fermaatay hainn keh...

"bin jaanay bin jurm kiyey ik doojay say bichhar gaye"
"Haalaann keh tha na koi bhi fard, meray aur tumharay beech"

Posted on 10/30/2005 6:26:21 PM

Thanks a lot bhai aap ki pasandeedgi ka bohat mashkor hon aur shere bohat he achha tha thanks apna khyal rakhyay ga aur mujh no amooz ki rahnamai kartay rehyay ga aap ki duao ka talab Amir

Posted on 10/31/2005 1:11:44 PM

Virdan:
Thanks a lot bhai aap ki pasandeedgi ka bohat mashkor hon aur shere bohat he achha tha thanks apna khyal rakhyay ga aur mujh no amooz ki rahnamai kartay rehyay ga aap ki duao ka talab Amir


Aap ki duaaonn ka Taalib..
Mashkoor hussain Yaad Yagana Changaizi...


Posted on 10/31/2005 7:44:05 PM

yeh changaiz lai changairi halaki sabaqi afaaqi khooni janooni majooni ka bhai lagta hay

Posted on 11/1/2005 1:10:59 PM

achhi hai

Posted on 11/1/2005 4:56:05 PM

Virdan:
yeh changaiz lai changairi halaki sabaqi afaaqi khooni janooni majooni ka bhai lagta hay



Posted on 11/1/2005 5:09:41 PM

han jee sachi paa jee

Posted on 11/4/2005 1:22:29 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA:
achhi hai

thanks a lot Queen

Posted on 11/4/2005 1:25:33 PM