Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

new_beau:

ROOSHANAASI...I think its wrong Word here..ROO means CHEHRA...aur ZAAT ka chehra nahin kaha ja sakta ...Try to change this misrah...

Buzurg-o-Bertar ..ko MERDAM SHANAASI kay paimaanay say Samajhna chahtay hainn aap...MERDAM shanaasi insaan ko Parakhnay kay liyey hoti hay..Yeh aap BUZERG-O-BERTER kis keh rahay hainn..EXPLAINN

These shairs are very good NIKLAY jo NIKLAINN say change ker lainn..I think..

AASII...means Gunehgaar...aur yeh ALIF say nahin AIN say hota hay...AIN ALIF SUAD YEH..

Change it,..and Reconsider this Shair...Iss mainn Kuchh Ziyaada JAAN nahin hay abhi...Agar AAP NAY ALIF say likha hay aur uss ka koi aur matlab hay tou sorry...but pls explain..

Very Good And Meaning Ful...

nice selection

Posted on 12/7/2005 11:47:04 PM

new_beau

Posted on 12/8/2005 9:06:50 AM

Virdan

Thanks a lot Hawa ki baiti 4 liking mine ghazals

Posted on 12/8/2005 2:36:03 PM

Fairl_Girl

nice peotry

Posted on 12/9/2005 1:01:47 AM

Virdan

Thanks Fairy Girl
its ur greatness otherwise iknow that there are great mistakes in it

Posted on 12/10/2005 1:44:19 PM

Fairl_Girl

main apki sare collection ki bat ki hai 1 poem ki nahi

Posted on 12/10/2005 11:04:38 PM

Virdan

jee mein ne bhi apnay saray collection ki he baat ki hay

Posted on 12/11/2005 11:22:31 AM

Virdan

Posted on 12/22/2005 4:09:13 PM

new_beau

THE BEST GHAZAL YOU HAVE EVER TOLD US OF YOURS...

Very Good...And Very Different MASHALLAH 100/100

Posted on 12/23/2005 10:23:47 PM

Virdan

Thanks Brother
magar aap bohat ganday bachay ho gaaiy hain apnay vaaday bhi aap ko ab yaad nahee rehtay hum aap se naraz hain

Posted on 12/25/2005 12:49:51 PM

new_beau

vAADA YAAD HAY ....tRY BHI KI thi magar mizaaj nahin mila

Posted on 12/26/2005 9:09:17 AM

QUEEN VICTORIA

vv nice ghazal virdan

Posted on 12/26/2005 5:39:28 PM

Virdan

QUEEN VICTORIA:
vv nice ghazal virdan

Thanks a lot Queen 4 liking it

Posted on 12/27/2005 12:20:36 PM

Virdan

new_beau:
vAADA YAAD HAY ....tRY BHI KI thi magar mizaaj nahin mila

chalein bhai aap yeh bata dein mil sakta hay keh nahee vada pora ho sakta hay keh nahee aap ki jo bhi baat ho gi hum isrsr nahee karein gay

Posted on 12/27/2005 12:21:53 PM

cuteshah

Posted on 1/1/2006 3:23:51 PM

Virdan

Thanks Cute shah its a very nice ghazal of Great Parveen Shakir but its not the perfect place 4 it

it is just 4 mine personal poetry hope u will understand
any mod plz move iton its right position

Posted on 1/3/2006 1:13:55 PM

Queen of jb

WOW GR8 VARDAN.......

Posted on 1/5/2006 5:52:58 PM

Virdan

Thanks a lot QUEEN

Posted on 1/8/2006 11:31:45 AM

Virdan

Posted on 1/10/2006 3:24:21 PM

ONLYARBAB

Virdan:

nice one
keep it up more and more

Posted on 1/13/2006 6:53:39 AM

Virdan

Thanks

Posted on 1/13/2006 2:13:01 PM

new_beau

Virdan:

Mainn Busy na hota tou Aap ki Baqayeda CLASS leta is sghazal per..Zara Saber ker teri Khair nain

Posted on 1/13/2006 10:44:01 PM

Virdan

jee zaroor class leejiyay ga is ghazal per kiyon keh yeh 2 shairo aur ik anari ka mushtarka kaam hay

Posted on 1/15/2006 2:21:12 PM

Anoushy

varden app keh kess ko rahy hain main ny tu app ki ess ghazal per bara aktafa kiya hai chalyein mera aik mamoli sa shaire per kay deakh layein

well app ki itni nice ghazal kay samny khuch nahi lakin per bi i hope app ko pasand aye ga

Posted on 1/16/2006 9:49:09 PM

Virdan

Bohat achha shere hay Thanks 4 sharing with me.
asal mein yahan per mein sirf apni zaati poetry send karta hon aur dosray apni raaiy se apnay khyalaat se mujhay nawaztay hain Aap parh kar mujhay apnay views zaroor bataiyay ga Thanks apna khyal rakhyay ga Allah Hafiz

Posted on 1/20/2006 12:23:18 PM

Anoushy

well aur kia kahoo bohat hi nice collection hai app ki ab ki bar send karayein gy na tu khob masaly laga ker apni nayab views bayan karoo geeeeee