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rao_buddy

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friends here is the game of batbazi start new with last digit
        kash tera ghar hotta maghrib ki janib
main sajde kia karta KABBA ka bahana
Posted 11 Oct 2005

new_beau says
ALIF


ik umr say khursheed kay saye mainn kharay hainn
hum ko teray daamann ki zaroorat bhi nahin hay

yeh
Posted 07 Dec 2005

yehi behtar hoga keh katra key nikal janey dey
saamna hoga to dil -----phir sey machal jae ga


alif
Posted 07 Dec 2005

new_beau says
"Arz-o-Sama'a pay rang tha kaisa, uter gaya"
"Aandhi chali tou Shaam ka Chehra uter gaya"

ALIF
Posted 08 Dec 2005

Doctor Sam says
abhi to roop saroop ka sona charda hua hey sooraj ban kar
jab in roshan meenaaron se dhoop dholay to aa jana tum..

Meem
Posted 08 Dec 2005

Ashii says
Mata e jaan ka badal aik pal ki sarshari
sulook khaab ka aankhon se tajirana tha



ALIF
Posted 09 Dec 2005

new_beau says
"Insha jee utho Ab Kooch kero, Iss Shehar mainn Jee ko Lagana Kiya"
"Wehshi ko sukoonn say kiya matlab, Jogi ka Nagar mainn Thikaana Kiya ?"

ALIF
Posted 09 Dec 2005

Ashii says
chalo fer



uss ki aankhon mei basharat thi nae khabon ki
me usse dekh k chonka bhi nahi tha shayad
aik baadal k mere naam se mansoob hua
mere sehra mei to barsa bhi nahi tha shayad


DAAL
Posted 09 Dec 2005

Doctor Sam says
dil ko kisi ka samna karne ki taab hi na thi
acha kiya k aankh ne aansu ko dermyaan kiya..

I just love it. bohat baar nick rakha hey. aor dil chahta hey hamesha rakhoon....



Alif
Posted 09 Dec 2005

Ashii says
daktarr
u and ur msn nicks




Aasman aas liye hai k yeh jaadoo toote
chup ki zanjeer kate wakt ka daaman choote
de koi sankh duhaee koi payal bole
koi buut jaage koi sanwli ghoonghat khole
lovvvvvve it

YEH
Posted 09 Dec 2005

ye udasiyoN ki raateiN chalo andherey meiN hi kaateiN
jo chiraagh bujh chukey heiN ab kya unhaiN jalaana
Posted 10 Dec 2005

new_beau says
ALIF


"Achhay Kabhi Buray Hainn Halaat Aadmi kay"
"Peechhay lagay huaye hainn..din raat aadmi kay"

YEH
Posted 10 Dec 2005

Ashii says
Yeh zameen pe jinn ka tha dabdaba k buland arsh pe naam tha
unhein yun falak ne mitta diya k mazaar ka bhi nishan nahin


NOON
Posted 11 Dec 2005

Doctor Sam says
nawa-pera ho a bulbul k ho tere tarannum se
kabootar k tan-e-naazuk main shaheen ka jigar peda..

alif
Posted 11 Dec 2005

new_beau says
"Ibtaday-e-Ishq hay Rota hay Kiya
Aagay Aagay Dekhiyey Hota hay kiya?"

ALIF
Posted 11 Dec 2005

Ak Dil K dard ko dil tornay waala kya jaane
pyar K rivaj ko ye zamana kya jaane
hoti hai kitni takleef kabar mein
uper se phool chardhhane waala kya jaane"
noon
Posted 11 Dec 2005

Na jaane kab meri duniya ---------mein muskurayega
Woh aik shaks keh khwaboon mein bhi khafa sa lagay

yeh
Posted 12 Dec 2005

Na!ma says
First post here....

YEa udasi0n kI ratEin chal0 andEray mEin katEin...
J0 charaG buJ chukaY ab kiyA unhEin jalanA....

(alif)
Posted 12 Dec 2005

new_beau says
Welcome Naima


ALIF

ik samt paas-e-Ishq tha, ik Samt apna maan
kaisay Gurez kertay, Koi Raasta na tha"

ALIF
Posted 12 Dec 2005

Doctor Sam says
aansu nikal parday to meri laaj reh gai
warna izhaar-e-ghum ka saleeqa na tha mujhe..

ye
Posted 12 Dec 2005

new_beau says
"Yeh Barf Zaar Baden say na jaann say niklay ga"
"Lahoo ho Sard tou Shola kahann say Niklay ga"

ALIF
Posted 12 Dec 2005

aaj kuch zakham nayaa lehja badal ke aaye
aaj kuch log naaye milgaye ahbaab ke saath
Posted 13 Dec 2005

new_beau says
"Hum Nay Hans Hans kay Bharam Ahl-e-Wafa ka Rakha
Hum bhi Ro Detay, Agar Ishq mainn Jhootay Hotay"

YEH
Posted 15 Dec 2005

Yeh khamooshi to merey dil ki deewarien ghira deygi
Mohabbat ho na ho per lab hila aahista aahista
Posted 15 Dec 2005

new_beau says
HAY....


"Ho na ho yeh Shab-e-Firaaq Hay Ashar"
"Iss raat ki Aankhonn ki Shanasayee Bohat hay"
Posted 17 Dec 2005

aikalone says
Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee
Posted 19 Dec 2005

Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai

Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga
Saqee   yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai
Posted 20 Dec 2005

new_beau says
aikalone said:

Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee




hawwa ki beti said:

Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai

Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga
Saqee   yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai



HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN....

Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue...
Posted 20 Dec 2005

new_beau said:

aikalone said:

Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee




hawwa ki beti said:

Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai

Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga
Saqee   yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai



HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN....

Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue...


ok jee my shair is with noon
instead of Y

Neend to dard k bistar peH bhi aa sakti hai
Teri aaghosh mein sar ho yeh zaroori to nahi

NEXT WITH> NOON< as well
Posted 21 Dec 2005

new_beau says
"najaanay kaun duaoonn mainn yaad rakhta hay"
"doob bhi jaoon tou samander uchaal deta hay"

yeh
Posted 21 Dec 2005

aikalone says
Ye sach hay agar yaqeen hota palat kar tarey aaney ka
tU phool kee tarah ham bhee taree raah main bikhar jatey

Yeh
Posted 22 Dec 2005

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