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ALIF


ik umr say khursheed kay saye mainn kharay hainn
hum ko teray daamann ki zaroorat bhi nahin hay

yeh
Posted on 12/7/2005 11:08:09 PM
yehi behtar hoga keh katra key nikal janey dey
saamna hoga to dil -----phir sey machal jae ga

alif
Posted on 12/7/2005 11:34:50 PM
"Arz-o-Sama'a pay rang tha kaisa, uter gaya"
"Aandhi chali tou Shaam ka Chehra uter gaya"

ALIF
Posted on 12/8/2005 9:11:50 AM
abhi to roop saroop ka sona charda hua hey sooraj ban kar
jab in roshan meenaaron se dhoop dholay to aa jana tum..

Meem
Posted on 12/8/2005 7:45:35 PM
Mata e jaan ka badal aik pal ki sarshari
sulook khaab ka aankhon se tajirana tha



ALIF
Posted on 12/9/2005 6:29:31 PM
"Insha jee utho Ab Kooch kero, Iss Shehar mainn Jee ko Lagana Kiya"
"Wehshi ko sukoonn say kiya matlab, Jogi ka Nagar mainn Thikaana Kiya ?"

ALIF
Posted on 12/9/2005 7:06:56 PM
chalo fer



uss ki aankhon mei basharat thi nae khabon ki
me usse dekh k chonka bhi nahi tha shayad
aik baadal k mere naam se mansoob hua
mere sehra mei to barsa bhi nahi tha shayad


DAAL
Posted on 12/9/2005 7:18:04 PM
dil ko kisi ka samna karne ki taab hi na thi
acha kiya k aankh ne aansu ko dermyaan kiya..

I just love it. bohat baar nick rakha hey. aor dil chahta hey hamesha rakhoon....



Alif
Posted on 12/9/2005 7:43:28 PM
daktarr
u and ur msn nicks




Aasman aas liye hai k yeh jaadoo toote
chup ki zanjeer kate wakt ka daaman choote
de koi sankh duhaee koi payal bole
koi buut jaage koi sanwli ghoonghat khole
lovvvvvve it

YEH
Posted on 12/9/2005 8:21:57 PM
ye udasiyoN ki raateiN chalo andherey meiN hi kaateiN
jo chiraagh bujh chukey heiN ab kya unhaiN jalaana
Posted on 12/10/2005 12:05:02 AM
ALIF


"Achhay Kabhi Buray Hainn Halaat Aadmi kay"
"Peechhay lagay huaye hainn..din raat aadmi kay"

YEH
Posted on 12/10/2005 11:36:20 PM
Yeh zameen pe jinn ka tha dabdaba k buland arsh pe naam tha
unhein yun falak ne mitta diya k mazaar ka bhi nishan nahin


NOON
Posted on 12/11/2005 2:02:15 PM
nawa-pera ho a bulbul k ho tere tarannum se
kabootar k tan-e-naazuk main shaheen ka jigar peda..

alif
Posted on 12/11/2005 6:03:38 PM
"Ibtaday-e-Ishq hay Rota hay Kiya
Aagay Aagay Dekhiyey Hota hay kiya?"

ALIF
Posted on 12/11/2005 9:34:05 PM
Ak Dil K dard ko dil tornay waala kya jaane
pyar K rivaj ko ye zamana kya jaane
hoti hai kitni takleef kabar mein
uper se phool chardhhane waala kya jaane"
noon
Posted on 12/11/2005 10:01:05 PM
Na jaane kab meri duniya ---------mein muskurayega
Woh aik shaks keh khwaboon mein bhi khafa sa lagay
yeh
Posted on 12/12/2005 4:26:32 AM
First post here....

YEa udasi0n kI ratEin chal0 andEray mEin katEin...
J0 charaG buJ chukaY ab kiyA unhEin jalanA....

(alif)
Posted on 12/12/2005 5:30:32 AM
Welcome Naima


ALIF

ik samt paas-e-Ishq tha, ik Samt apna maan
kaisay Gurez kertay, Koi Raasta na tha"

ALIF
Posted on 12/12/2005 4:15:05 PM
aansu nikal parday to meri laaj reh gai
warna izhaar-e-ghum ka saleeqa na tha mujhe..

ye
Posted on 12/12/2005 8:12:39 PM
"Yeh Barf Zaar Baden say na jaann say niklay ga"
"Lahoo ho Sard tou Shola kahann say Niklay ga"

ALIF
Posted on 12/12/2005 9:22:20 PM
aaj kuch zakham nayaa lehja badal ke aaye
aaj kuch log naaye milgaye ahbaab ke saath
Posted on 12/13/2005 12:17:31 AM
"Hum Nay Hans Hans kay Bharam Ahl-e-Wafa ka Rakha
Hum bhi Ro Detay, Agar Ishq mainn Jhootay Hotay"

YEH
Posted on 12/15/2005 9:12:34 AM
Yeh khamooshi to merey dil ki deewarien ghira deygi
Mohabbat ho na ho per lab hila aahista aahista
Posted on 12/15/2005 9:56:45 PM
HAY....


"Ho na ho yeh Shab-e-Firaaq Hay Ashar"
"Iss raat ki Aankhonn ki Shanasayee Bohat hay"
Posted on 12/17/2005 3:33:03 PM
Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee
Posted on 12/19/2005 1:22:49 PM
Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai

Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga
Saqee   yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai
Posted on 12/20/2005 6:50:59 AM
aikalone:
Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee



hawwa ki beti:
Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai

Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga
Saqee   yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai


HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN....

Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue...
Posted on 12/20/2005 9:13:35 PM
new_beau:
aikalone:
Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee



hawwa ki beti:
Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai

Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga
Saqee   yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai


HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN....

Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue...


ok jee my shair is with noon
instead of Y

Neend to dard k bistar peH bhi aa sakti hai
Teri aaghosh mein sar ho yeh zaroori to nahi

NEXT WITH> NOON< as well
Posted on 12/21/2005 1:26:22 AM
"najaanay kaun duaoonn mainn yaad rakhta hay"
"doob bhi jaoon tou samander uchaal deta hay"

yeh
Posted on 12/21/2005 9:44:30 PM
Ye sach hay agar yaqeen hota palat kar tarey aaney ka
tU phool kee tarah ham bhee taree raah main bikhar jatey

Yeh
Posted on 12/22/2005 12:43:39 PM
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